Moth Made
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Stallie
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Moth Made
Hey everyone
A month ago I finished a track, called Moth Made.
It's not my latest track.
I wanna know what you think about it :
And here are some links of my other tracks i made before this one:
A naked track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2n9KSZbxU_8
A halfdone scened track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CQrtjG4DAAo
And my first track i ever made : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=euhNfN5FEt8
This is my newest, but I allready showed you this track:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjx0hV1Wm1w
Hope you enjoy!
A month ago I finished a track, called Moth Made.
It's not my latest track.
I wanna know what you think about it :
And here are some links of my other tracks i made before this one:
A naked track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2n9KSZbxU_8
A halfdone scened track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CQrtjG4DAAo
And my first track i ever made : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=euhNfN5FEt8
This is my newest, but I allready showed you this track:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjx0hV1Wm1w
Hope you enjoy!
Pinter- Member
Re: Moth Made
haha, I can tell it was very inspired by Millennium by DaPoe
Pretty neat track - I can definitely tell you are improving alot!
Pretty neat track - I can definitely tell you are improving alot!
Re: Moth Made
^ ThatCamQuartr wrote:haha, I can tell it was very inspired by Millennium by DaPoe
You had some smooth and well done scenery in there ^^ However you had him riding inside objects a few times. Scenery looks better if you avoid riding inside scenery objects. Very well done on your scenery, you should make more ^^
Wolf_Spirit- Member
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Re: Moth Made
now i'm making a speed manual, but i think it's not smooth enough
thanx for the comments , i knew it is riding in opbjects and stuff.. and i always forget my inspiration :$
thanx for the comments , i knew it is riding in opbjects and stuff.. and i always forget my inspiration :$
Pinter- Member
Re: Moth Made
Millenium No. 2! I saw a whole lot of dapoe in there. Love this track, man, you're gonna be really good someday. Try to work on flow killers. When I say that, I'm talking about the stuff like at 0:33, where he just does the same stuff over and over. But anywho, your scenery is awesome, keep playing.
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