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Abstract Beauty - GhostY and Splash

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Post by GhostY Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:23 am

I scened Solitude :3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXqZzPcU6Lw

Thanks to SCG for recording and editing, and to Cam for reminding me that I should finish this before ToCC2 xD
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Post by Sheldon Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:32 am

Whoa you actually kept the spider.
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Post by Chui Ninji Thu Jun 30, 2011 1:23 am

Youtube:
FFFFF. That was crazy and mind blowing and all that shenanigan stuff.

Btw, I see how it's a tree now. That was a super hawt tree. :P Along with that booble spider.
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Post by Commandercoke Thu Jun 30, 2011 11:26 am

First of all...AWESOME!

Second...congratulations on finishing in time!

Third...how dare you continue to foil my chances!

<3
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Post by rabid squirrel Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:45 pm

The art was great...

it just felt like a pile of crap though. I had no clue where the track was 90% of the time, and nothing made any sense with anything else. This was ok in incito but it sucks in solitude.

Great job and all, and very impressive, but wasn't all that fun to watch for me :/ It also looked a lot like your other tracks, I feel like you need to branch out.

When I paused it and looked at the art though, I really liked the abstract tree, the face was awesomesauce, and I lol'd at the AC cloud.

Ambitious? Somewhat
Epic factor/Impressive? Somewhat
Complete/Cohesive? Not really
Vision? Definitely lacking
An Experience? Not really

Quality of art? Great
Creativity in scening things? Yes
Speed manipulations? None
Detail? Lots
Consistency? Somewhat
Unified Theme? Nope
Originality? Meh, seemed a lot like your other tracks
Speed? meh

Monument placement? meh, the face at the end was good
Monument usage? none
3-D (extrusion, adding shine, shading, contour lines, adding depth)? basically none
Made sense? not at all
"Hiding" the track? (this is bad) waaaaaaaaay too much of this. To the point of ridiculousity.
Good Ending? yes (didn't realize what it was until it zoomed out)
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