Linerider: Cascade secned preview

by Stallie Mon May 30, 2011 9:28 pm

I hope you guys will enjoy this and thanks for watching. Linerider: Cascade secned preview 173596

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bUGIXD3PJow

by linerage Mon May 30, 2011 11:11 pm

This is a preview though...

by darklight Mon May 30, 2011 11:26 pm

son, previews go in the preview section.

other than that, it looked good!

by Helios Pavonine Tue May 31, 2011 10:59 am

That was an epic preview

Don't leave so many blank spaces! It looks like you didn't finish scening yet. Also, zoom in more, you could have scened less but still keeping the viewer's attention Smile

by Derpinator Tue May 31, 2011 11:43 am

Why use my song

To the preview:
that was both awesome track and scenery

by efrazable Tue May 31, 2011 2:29 pm

That was like Avatar preview dramatic.

by Stallie Tue May 31, 2011 3:29 pm

linerage wrote:This is a preview though...

Did you liked it linerage?

by Inukaza Tue May 31, 2011 3:52 pm

stallie wrote:
linerage wrote:This is a preview though...

Yeah inu and crabfishpeople didn't understand that it was a preview that i posted on ELR.

A preview is giving a expectation of what you will see in a coming product Don't go around talking about me like that, it's not like I do the same to you publicly. I totally dislike it that, when I said it nicely the first time, you totally went insane and started to talk like this.

Don't ruin a great track. Also, don't speak for myself when you don't know what's going on.

(Staff, if you have a problem, PM me and I'll explain.)

EDIT: You haven't even asked TCR if you can use his track...

by rabid squirrel Tue May 31, 2011 4:01 pm

sorry stallie, but I agree with Inu. The scenery is empty, and it is sloppy. He's riding inside objects, there is significant amounts of covering up the track, I don't see anything original (just a lot of hills-shine overuse and some other badly executed shading styles lifted out of other tracks), the sun and mountains is really out of place and just plain sloppy, there are a lot of spots that look like half-assed attempts to make a difficult-to-scene part make sense but which ultimately failed and look very confusing and illogical, but not really artfully abstract. Just bad. And of course there are large white spaces and it's really zoomed out. Does the track even have a theme?

I'm sorry that this is harsh, but there's really no sense in beating around the bush, especially when you're going to tell someone who criticizes you that you don't want to hear it. Don't post videos because you want people to tell you that you're awesome, post videos in order to get criticism and improve. (until you get really good, and then you can factor in the for-others'-enjoyment factor)