Woodland Waterfall- efrazable

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cNu5yTVFYW4&safety_mode=true&persist_safety_mode=1

Chui Ninji told me to leave less white space on my tracks, this is the result; not done .

Lol 12 months? I didn't realize that you've been on these forums longer than me. looks good so far, but it's really going to take a while to finish, if you're going to scene it with little white space.

The school is taking my laptop today for over the summer to wipe the hard drive and run updates, and I can't use the stand-alone on it, so the .sol is lost forever .

And you didn't put it on mediafire? Come on, man, back up the files.

i see see a right evolution in your track ! you should find a solution to finish !

Very nice .. i love it all except those small lines u put in.. i found those a little annoying... but rly nice

Amazing scenery. Just remember: Quality > Quantity. You don't need a bunch of lines to make enjoyable scenery.

Manuals were... well... wobbly, but this wasn't meant for the track I guess.

Keep up the scenery, mayne!

Get some variation in line thickness! I promise it's worth the time. Double lining those tress would've helped them stound out more. I know some sceners (Rabid) might disagree, but I've always found success in line variation.
In addition, I didn't understand the point of the blackened area. Black spots can create more contrast in a track, but I don't think it helped in this case. Just confused me.
Awesome stuff though. Don't let the loss of the .sol get you down. Start something new; something even better. And please get Standalone!

Yea i lost 2 .sols that i was working on one only had a few more lines to finish it. but i just watched some more tracks and got inspired again so don't give up!!

also less white space doesn't mean completely black it just means you could add some detail to hills or add more.

That was pretty good, dude, try to spread out you verity of, xy, manuals, and flings, over all the scenery was good, nice job.

Looking good try to add more of a variety in type like not just manuals but add some flings.Things like that.

Man looking good.Stallie said most of what I was going to say.So yeah,keep it up.