Chilling - HotFlash
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Chilling - HotFlash
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vHCa398O5SM
Dont hate the disgusting monument .. it was something i saw in one of techdawgs vids, i tried to redo it and failed pretty much.. anyways i thought of pure's "simple pleasure" when i began making the track, so i thought i would make a track with tricks i like making, and i also wanted to practice manuals...
Plz give feedback
Hotflash- Member
Re: Chilling - HotFlash
Wow you are very good at manuals make more manuals we need more people who make them
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You're definitely a manualer. I strongly recommend watching this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gfiHUZeSae8
It's helped me a lot
For the rest you did a great job. I love this gravity well barrel rolls like on 0:20.
Keep making those tracks
It's helped me a lot
For the rest you did a great job. I love this gravity well barrel rolls like on 0:20.
Keep making those tracks
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Chilling - HotFlash
Wow, if that's the best manual tutorial out to this date, we are in need of a better one.
But yeah, you've got some solid manuals in there. Don't worry too much about how "smooth" the curve looks, but just try to have even pressure on the sled throughout. If said manual does have even pressure, the curve should automatically be smooth anyways.
You've improved from your last tracks
But yeah, you've got some solid manuals in there. Don't worry too much about how "smooth" the curve looks, but just try to have even pressure on the sled throughout. If said manual does have even pressure, the curve should automatically be smooth anyways.
You've improved from your last tracks
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
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is ppl complimenting me just because of rafaels thread about critizising?.. sometimes having lankher to comment is nice ^^.. anyways.. thanks for the tips and stuff.. i checked out that tutorial rafael.. it says never use backspeed lines.. however, SCG did it in blitzed... its in featured section here on WRTL and its on the HOF on elr
Hotflash- Member
Re: Chilling - HotFlash
Hey Hotflash, since you've been giving me some great feedback, and helping me improve rather quickly, I saw this and decided to give the little bit of feedback i can offer to you and since im a beginner i have none lol but ty for posting the track, hopefully i can impliment the manuals into my next tracks, ive always had a ton of problems with manuals, usually get pissed, give up, and put a gwell there ty
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I think the people who have posted so far will have complimented you anyway, but I'm hoping Raf's thread made an impact ^^
You really do have some great manuals, I love the barrel rolls and you really have improved!
The flow, it was great at the start and near the end, however you killed the flow slightly at some parts. Meaning, you just slowed him down, try to maintain the same sort of speed throughout ^^
You have some really good g-wells and granuals too
So overall, you're doing amazingly well on your tracks, I hope you release more ^^ +rep
You really do have some great manuals, I love the barrel rolls and you really have improved!
The flow, it was great at the start and near the end, however you killed the flow slightly at some parts. Meaning, you just slowed him down, try to maintain the same sort of speed throughout ^^
You have some really good g-wells and granuals too
So overall, you're doing amazingly well on your tracks, I hope you release more ^^ +rep
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