Detour - HotFlash

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I can just tell with a little practice you're going to be pro at this. Not only that, but you're releasing like 2 tracks a week, which is really impressive .
You might want to focus more on your flings than the manulals, because they're so much better. And also, work on the little freestyle stuff(Like at :11), because right now, they're just a major flow killer.

Wow you have imporved alot over the past months. I told you that you are getting better and better just like kiwi told me and now look you have gotten better. nice job

Opal Rider wrote:I can just tell with a little practice you're going to be pro at this. Not only that, but you're releasing like 2 tracks a week, which is really impressive .
You might want to focus more on your flings than the manulals, because they're so much better. And also, work on the little freestyle stuff(Like at :11), because right now, they're just a major flow killer.

I disagree, I think that the manuals were actually much better than the flings. I see a future manualer, no joke! You've got some nice tail manuals.

Oh wow, you certianly are improving rapidly
Your manuals are quite smooth now and I think your tail manuals are very good ^^ You have some decent flings and a veriety of them too, so keep improving and very well done with this track!
All I could suggest to improve on is cutting down on slowing down the track, because it started off quite slow, if you maintain the speed thoughout, it looks better ^^

I see you got the hang of trackmaking! It was a very nice but short track, but here are a few tips: Try to improve (not very much, they were actually very good for a beginner) your curves and make them smoother. Also try to make stronger wells which face eachother at a bigger angle (like at 0:38: all lines are very close to eachother and are positioned at a slightly different angle compared to the previous wells). Nice song too!