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Post by Trinity37185_Rim Sat Jan 22, 2011 4:28 pm

My new XY(The Intro is´nt XY^^)

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Post by Orthuss Sat Jan 22, 2011 4:33 pm

Pretty good, keep up the work!
Try to make an all-blue XY next time around.
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Post by TigerXLine Sat Jan 22, 2011 6:07 pm

Great job, Trinity! Very Happy

Improvements ++

Try to make amnall-blue-XY next time (cuz peopel like it better? =/)

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Post by linerage Sat Jan 22, 2011 9:37 pm

Hehe, it's nice to see someone that you've invited from youtube to come here, and make such a surprisingly good track ^.^ I'm proud of both you and me. Now let's parteehh!
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Post by Opal Rider Sat Jan 22, 2011 11:30 pm

Good job. It could be longer. the normal track length is around 45 sec. sometimes longer, sometimes shorter. Also, if you're going to use red lines, you might want to try out manual tracks. People don't like seeing red in many other styles... or any other, for that matter, except maybe flatsledding, and that's not done too much any more. =/
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Post by LineMagiX Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:48 am

Loved it. =] Way better than my first XY. The stall was really tight too!
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Post by Derpinator Sun Jan 23, 2011 2:15 am

Woah :O
That was really sick, compared to that it's your first XY track.
I thought the speed was fine, no problem with that.

It was a bit shame you ruined the allblue-ness with the two reds, try to avoid that Smile

I thought it was a little wierd when you were about to show the colored playback, and you wrote blue, though it wasn't blue xD

Enjoy your supscription, +rep, friend (well, we are already friends but now it's for reals) xD
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Post by SETH Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:11 pm

pretty nice track, try to make full tricks for the next (no flat)
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Post by Sssschiller Mon Jan 24, 2011 3:13 pm

cool track and cool music Very Happy
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Mon Jan 24, 2011 3:23 pm

That was pretty good, bosh maintained the same speed roughly for the whole track which is a huge plus for XY. You also had some fun little tricks in there and a tiny bit of recycling. So very well done! 8D
Next time consider these things:
Using all blue, it's good when an XY track is made with a challenge.
Using less tumbling, so he doesn't just do down. You can use pinches for this.
Great stuff overall! ^^
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Post by Lukking Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:38 pm

wow im actually impressed xD
u improve fast!
cool track but make a longer now Thumbs Up
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Post by PrinterFind Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:27 am

too nizzle 8D nice^^
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