OTDE-- Linger

I made this in two days.

Link to Linger on YT

i love your style. so soothing but has immense expression in its speed changes. The way you influence the rider to move... its very soulful. And then again its amazing for making this in 2 days.

/copy from youtube. But seriously, this style is too smooth. its amazing.
btw, loved the start, very creative and unexpected.

it was the best at the start, then it got meh in the middle. BUT, i have to say that ur manuals were all really smooth and balanced, and had it's OTDE flow to it, so i liekz

I liked it a lot! your manuals are so smooth, you don't know what happens the next, flings are awesome.
Enjoy your +rep
EDIT: I just thought I would test my review out...

Trick Variation: 6/10. The variation was good. But you needed integration

Speed Variation: 7/10. I guess this is not the most important thing for a track like this, but you kept the same speed all time, which is a good thing IMO

Smoothness: 10/10. As smooth as it could be. It was insanely smooth.

Balance: 8/10. Balanced manuals you have there.

Flow: 8/10. That was also really good. You kept it, and I never got bored.

Lenght: 5/10. It felt a little short for me.

Ending/Stall: 3/10. This is something personally for me. I hate those stalls.

Rating: 47/70


Did it deserve a +rep? Yea

lol i didn't notice it was in color until you played it again

I love your manual-style!

The track was so entertaining and the flow was great. The smoothness was good and the music fit to the track!

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Rapto wrote:I liked it a lot! your manuals are so smooth, you don't know what happens the next, flings are awesome.
Enjoy your +rep
EDIT: I just thought I would test my review out...

Trick Variation: 6/10. The variation was good. But you needed integration

Speed Variation: 7/10. I guess this is not the most important thing for a track like this, but you kept the same speed all time, which is a good thing IMO

Smoothness: 10/10. As smooth as it could be. It was insanely smooth.

Balance: 8/10. Balanced manuals you have there.

Flow: 8/10. That was also really good. You kept it, and I never got bored.

Lenght: 5/10. It felt a little short for me.

Ending/Stall: 3/10. This is something personally for me. I hate those stalls.

Rating: 47/70


Did it deserve a +rep? Yea

Well this is my review for it, my opinions are fairly different.
Trick Variation: 8/10
Since this is a manual track, trick variation isnt heavily needed. But see that you were playing with the manuals and making him rotate in different ways one of my fav is 0:47 . There were also some nice flings so that's a +, no recycling tho so -1
Speed Variation(flow): 8/10
the speed was mostly constant but you gotta watch out for air time. I suppose airtime is in the trick variations, but it affected your speed. i dont think i've seen one bit of creative air time in here because it was like air tight, and that affects the speed because if the speed is constant for your whole track, then wouldn't it get boring? yarly. so if you could just extend that air time@ 52 then it'd be great.
Smoothness: 9/10
it wasnt as smooth as i thought it would be, but it made the affect on me, so i'd say this deserves a 9/10
Balance: 7/10(?)
this one... im not sure. it might be that you purposely played with the rotations, or your manuals are so wobbly that you gotta evolve your manual into somethin else.
Length: 9/10
it was a minute long, so, better than i can do!
Ending/Stall: 5/10
the stall... lacked creativity, and it didnt go great with the pinch right before it. I dont really like stalls where you have to actually ride on them, so it might be because of that.
Rating: 46+4/60 It was a good track, and i added the four because you made it in two days. MAKE MOARZ

I really enjoyed that

It's like a better version of my style, +rep

there are a bit too many nose flings, but its pretty good!

ur getting better

linerage wrote:

Rapto wrote:I liked it a lot! your manuals are so smooth, you don't know what happens the next, flings are awesome.
Enjoy your +rep
EDIT: I just thought I would test my review out...

Trick Variation: 6/10. The variation was good. But you needed integration

Speed Variation: 7/10. I guess this is not the most important thing for a track like this, but you kept the same speed all time, which is a good thing IMO

Smoothness: 10/10. As smooth as it could be. It was insanely smooth.

Balance: 8/10. Balanced manuals you have there.

Flow: 8/10. That was also really good. You kept it, and I never got bored.

Lenght: 5/10. It felt a little short for me.

Ending/Stall: 3/10. This is something personally for me. I hate those stalls.

Rating: 47/70


Did it deserve a +rep? Yea

Well this is my review for it, my opinions are fairly different.
Trick Variation: 8/10
Since this is a manual track, trick variation isnt heavily needed. But see that you were playing with the manuals and making him rotate in different ways one of my fav is 0:47 . There were also some nice flings so that's a +, no recycling tho so -1
Speed Variation(flow): 8/10
the speed was mostly constant but you gotta watch out for air time. I suppose airtime is in the trick variations, but it affected your speed. i dont think i've seen one bit of creative air time in here because it was like air tight, and that affects the speed because if the speed is constant for your whole track, then wouldn't it get boring? yarly. so if you could just extend that air time@ 52 then it'd be great.
Smoothness: 9/10
it wasnt as smooth as i thought it would be, but it made the affect on me, so i'd say this deserves a 9/10
Balance: 7/10(?)
this one... im not sure. it might be that you purposely played with the rotations, or your manuals are so wobbly that you gotta evolve your manual into somethin else.
Length: 9/10
it was a minute long, so, better than i can do!
Ending/Stall: 5/10
the stall... lacked creativity, and it didnt go great with the pinch right before it. I dont really like stalls where you have to actually ride on them, so it might be because of that.
Rating: 46+4/60 It was a good track, and i added the four because you made it in two days. MAKE MOARZ

You could do a huge review taking loads of time....OR you could do this:

rabid squirrel wrote:I really enjoyed that

I lol'd
Awesome track OtDE, I really liked your style, however the intro leading into the track irriated me....just didn't seem to fit in with line rider.

I really liked the ending, despite the lack of monuments etc, and it was really good. reminds me of cereal but with smaller manuals. Very nice.

wolf_spirit wrote:You could do a huge review taking loads of time....OR you could do this:

rabid squirrel wrote:I really enjoyed that

I lol'd

long reviews have a place in the world, but sometimes a nice concise comment feels better.

Omg, review time. Because my opinion is kewl, I'm linerider expert.

Trick Variation - Its guuuud - 5/21
Speed Variation - I liek - 17/10
Smoothness - Well I would've done it like this I would've -3/4
Balance - I approve (smiley) - 8/3
Length - I can count seconds duurrrrr 23/116
Ending/Stall - I liek, so digged the part where it ended 6/1
Rating - herp/derp

.......


But seriously, nice job.

Painlobster wrote:Omg, review time. Because my opinion is kewl, I'm linerider expert.

Trick Variation - Its guuuud - 5/21
Speed Variation - I liek - 17/10
Smoothness - Well I would've done it like this I would've -3/4
Balance - I approve (smiley) - 8/3
Length - I can count seconds duurrrrr 23/116
Ending/Stall - I liek, so digged the part where it ended 6/1
Rating - herp/derp

.......


But seriously, nice job.

Funniest thing I've read on the internet in a long time You just made my day PL

Painlobster wrote:Omg, review time. Because my opinion is kewl, I'm linerider expert.

Trick Variation - Its guuuud - 5/21
Speed Variation - I liek - 17/10
Smoothness - Well I would've done it like this I would've -3/4
Balance - I approve (smiley) - 8/3
Length - I can count seconds duurrrrr 23/116
Ending/Stall - I liek, so digged the part where it ended 6/1
Rating - herp/derp

.......


But seriously, nice job.

PL for best critic of the month anyone?

speaking of best critic, what happened to member awards? C'mon Kohu, I believe in you.

It was very smooth and tight; very enjoyable to watch. (TWHS) Also the music fit the track's soft and relaxing feel well.

On the downside a manual track like this isn't very original, Cereal releases tracks like this all the time, his do seem to lack the rotational proficiency of this track though.

Anyway I guess you can't expect someone to be extremely imaginative with a two day track. In fact this track is quite good for two days. I doubt I could do this in a week.

Something surprising about this track unlike most modern manual tracks, which get boring after ten seconds, is that this stays interesting all the way though I guess because of the constant variety in standard manual track tricks like the barrel roll thing at 00:47 - 00:49 and the various pinches and quirks.

Considering this was made in two days there's really not a lot to complain about.

+REP

EDIT:

Painlobster wrote:Omg, review time. Because my opinion is kewl, I'm linerider expert.

Trick Variation - Its guuuud - 5/21
Speed Variation - I liek - 17/10
Smoothness - Well I would've done it like this I would've -3/4
Balance - I approve (smiley) - 8/3
Length - I can count seconds duurrrrr 23/116
Ending/Stall - I liek, so digged the part where it ended 6/1
Rating - herp/derp

.......


But seriously, nice job.

^ I srsly lol'd.