Fire by Rapto - Manual battle

...or here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W8eNrVWdREk
...or here

My entry for the manual battle against Nirobi, iPi and yobanjojoe.
I think it turned out pretty well, compared to my other videos

Somehow flatsled parts in manual tracks bother me.

Anyway, nice track! But, still, NORBI

Well, It didn't blow my mind, but there was some moments that was better than the others. =/

The music was okay... =/

Btw, why did you zoom out so much?

too lazy to record it again

Rapto wrote:too lazy to record it again

Kay...

Sorvius used this song, but like I said before, using a song that someone else used does NOT matter.

As for the track, here are some suggestions:

-Zoom in more on the recording
-use more pressure on manuals
-have less wobbly manuals
-have smoother curves

It was alright, but there is something awkward about your manuals that I can't really describe... stick to this style though, because manuals are MUCH easier than any other style.

gl in the battle I guess

It wuz um okay I suppose?

Cereal wrote:Sorvius used this song, but like I said before, using a song that someone else used does NOT matter.

As for the track, here are some suggestions:

-Zoom in more on the recording
-use more pressure on manuals
-have less wobbly manuals
-have smoother curves

It was alright, but there is something awkward about your manuals that I can't really describe... stick to this style though, because manuals are MUCH easier than any other style.

gl in the battle I guess

Could you tell what you think is ackward about my manuals?!?!