Double Stack - 1473
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Double Stack - 1473
It's been awhile, but I have a new track. Although technically not really new since it's pretty dang old (over a year), so I decided to add some more on and stall it so I could release this. The newer part starts just a little before the short downwards integration.
I guess you could sorta call it a trash track.
Next track will hopefully be a lot better.
1473- Member
Re: Double Stack - 1473
It looked very rough and unsmooth. I know some people have a hard time with just the idea putting smooth and quirk together, but yea. Bosh was basically forced to move the entire time, it was getting uncomfortable to watch IMO
It was alright, and good job.
It was alright, and good job.
Inukaza- Member
Re: Double Stack - 1473
I really liked it, especially with the 'stalls' every 10 seconds or so ^^
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
Re: Double Stack - 1473
Like the quirks and LOVE the manuals. Even tough they are a little unsmooth some places.
Plz make more with those manuals! I LOVE THEM, really!
(And was it just me, or is it a little bit darker than normal) (it wasn't so white)
Plz make more with those manuals! I LOVE THEM, really!
(And was it just me, or is it a little bit darker than normal) (it wasn't so white)
TigerXLine- Member
- I used to play Line Rider and be weird.
Re: Double Stack - 1473
Quoted from YouTube (I am lazy):
I missed you, and I'm glad you're back!
I always did wee potential in you, this track is awesome. It's like a mix between PainLobster and georgiojc o_O
Keep it up.
I missed you, and I'm glad you're back!
I always did wee potential in you, this track is awesome. It's like a mix between PainLobster and georgiojc o_O
Keep it up.
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Double Stack - 1473
this track is flipping weird. It's like Bosh is twitching and then manuals come in and it's nice. Hard to explain. I really want to see you do an integration styled track.
Nice track though, most parts we're just awkward and felt a little too 'pushy'
naw mean?
Try to edge out those 'pushy' parts and it'll be much better good work though, especially being over a year old
Nice track though, most parts we're just awkward and felt a little too 'pushy'
naw mean?
Try to edge out those 'pushy' parts and it'll be much better good work though, especially being over a year old
Wizzy- Member
Re: Double Stack - 1473
You should of named it "Resurrection"... Cuz you stalled the track and then it continued to go on... Like you killed the track and then brought it back to life.
FirePumaEnt- Member
Re: Double Stack - 1473
I like it but it needs a bit more stopps&speed (imo)
Btw my cat likes it too (He watched it and wents nearer to desktop when he was stalled ) (And he jumped of my desk when colour came )
Btw my cat likes it too (He watched it and wents nearer to desktop when he was stalled ) (And he jumped of my desk when colour came )
Catz- Member
Re: Double Stack - 1473
I agree with Inu, but your integration is really creative. Make a track like that!
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Double Stack - 1473
It was interesting. Just something about it. Not sure if I found it to be good or bad. Experiment more.
Re: Double Stack - 1473
I guess I liked it because of that. *shrug*Inu wrote:It looked very rough and unsmooth. I know some people have a hard time with just the idea putting smooth and quirk together, but yea. Bosh was basically forced to move the entire time, it was getting uncomfortable to watch IMO
although I felt there were some moments where there was sort of a loss of control that I didn't like, but it's kind of hard to explain. Maybe pay more attention to flow manipulation? I'm sure it'll get better with practice
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