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Winter Solstace

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Post by Apple Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:15 pm

My favorite track ive dont so far. Anomaly inspired. I know its not exactly his style, but he inspired me to make this.

please give me feedback.

PPTEDIT: Don't put embeded videos in spoilers because then when you click play the spoiler closes and you can't watch the video. Or..at least for me Suspicious
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Post by pure5152 Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:20 pm

you compromised flow for compactness at times, and sometimes the flow was just killed completely xD the speed was a little too flow for my liking, and a lot of the g-wells weren't as strong as they possibly could be to get the best results. the stall was a bit odd feeling, but I liked the quarky-ness and the quirkiness overall. good job!
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Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:25 pm

whoa... really reminded me of my old style in Andante.
What an odd feeling lol.

Loved the track. Lots of experimental stuff in there, was great. Smile
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Post by CamQuartr Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:45 pm

It was, alright.

It was kinda slow at some parts, which made it a bit boring, But there were some pretty impressive tricks.

nice job

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Post by Cereal Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:47 pm

Impressive tricks, but too many flow killers.

Try to keep consistant flow and less airtime, and with tricks like that, you'll be really good!

Nice job.
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Post by Apple Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:54 pm

CamQuartr wrote:It was, alright.

It was kinda slow at some parts, which made it a bit boring, But there were some pretty impressive tricks.

nice job

I was dissapointed at the rate i recorded it. it added ten seconds. the track was 50 seconds, but it recorded it in 59. it would have looked a little nicer if it was recorded right.
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Post by CamQuartr Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:53 pm

you should have sped it up a bit more or rerecorded it.

Tip: Don't settle with anything less then perfection Wink

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Post by Purtle Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:20 pm

Mainly what other people said. Had some nice stuff but then it just liked died and it ruined it.
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:02 am

It's "solstice" - sorry that just REALLY bugged me and I can't believe nobody else pointed it out xD (and it's the middle of august so um... wat)

not too much to say about the track. I liked the recycled tail manual at the end :P
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Post by Lankher Fri Aug 20, 2010 3:59 am

it. was. crap.

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Post by linerage Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:45 pm

Lankher wrote:it. was. crap.

lrn2lr

u cant do better :| i liked it. just a bit slow some times and it seems like it got worse as it progressed. the recycling was great, it impressed me.
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Post by TigerXLine Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:19 pm

Not so much to say. I'm a manualer and this isn't my sort of track to judge.

ONE THING: Very experimental! Thumbs Up

Keep it up! Very Happy
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Post by Apple Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:39 pm

TigerLine7 wrote:Not so much to say. I'm a manualer and this isn't my sort of track to judge.

ONE THING: Very experimental! Thumbs Up

Keep it up! Very Happy

EXACTLY. that was the biggest reason for this track. see how people responded to it. testing weird stuff. thats why it says "please leave feedback" up at the top.
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