Containment of Eternity - Traxiliciouslyaxis

Yeah, another track... That's it
Btw, watch the blue proof, because it is actual speed, the black and white version is like 6 seconds off, Idk why it does that, it goes slower when its black and white.

Now, go grab a drink, go to the bathroom, grab a snack, come back, and watch it without any interruptions! You will enjoy it. K go!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CO8NEeCpSnc&fmt=18

I see what you mean about the slower in black & white. I think the track was awesome! Very smooth and flow-y great work!!!!!

Needs moar tailies .-.

The ones that you did have for the most part were unbalanced.

Felt like a lot of nose related flings/gwells too but idk maybe thats just me.

one sentence can describe it.

This track would be perfect if there was more variety and if there was less airtime and if there were stronger flings.

otherwise goojob

That left me wanting a long, powerful squish. You should learn to do them, they're very useful, and would fit well with your style.
Also, maybe work on your neatness a bit? Seemed rather Ktk-ish

Nice, though; I enjoyed it.

Squishies and No Ktk, Got it
I really don't think about squishies, but the track I'm making for the LCC will have every trick (except feet flings) done well, so I'll have squishies. Thanks for the comments guys.

needs moar tailies .-.

It was pretty good, and the flow was the best part about it.

But some fliings were pretty weak tbh.

Very good! Great flow! It was a bit messy though...
Over all I give it a 4/5! Very good!
You did better than I woul've ever done!

Some flings were meant to be weak, I don't want uber super power in some spots because it would have killed the flow.