Attack-Se7en

by Se7eN Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:21 pm

Dont be too hard on me
its only my 3rd track

by rich Sat Jun 27, 2009 3:05 pm

it was good a little short. try not to flat sled and i can't say anything about not being messy because im a messy track maker. try to not have that much air time its alright but i didnt go with the style of quirk you were doing, which is manuals.

by Purtle Sat Jun 27, 2009 6:09 pm

Some of the curves could have been smoother. it was too short. 1-1:45 is what you should be aiming for. (personally i think even 1 min is a bit short. i like 1:45 range.)

Too many granuals compared to the other tricks, you didn't have much else. Also only one tail manual which was not really that good either =P.

Keep practicing.

by Wolf_Spirit Sun Jun 28, 2009 5:23 am

I really love the music - being a fan of 30stm myself.....I thought the track was great for your third track! Even if it was a bit short I thought it was still good. Also, try to not have any flat sledding ^^

by Se7eN Sun Jun 28, 2009 7:44 pm

wolf_spirit wrote:I really love the music - being a fan of 30stm myself.....I thought the track was great for your third track! Even if it was a bit short I thought it was still good. Also, try to not have any flat sledding ^^

Thnks alot...
Im starting a longer (1-1:30) track tht probobly will be scened

by StingDaFling Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:10 am

bad:
flatsledding
bad curves
messy and rather weak flings/granuals
too short
stall was alright

good:
amazing for a first released track.

keep working on it.

by Binglinerider Mon Jun 29, 2009 9:43 am

i dont see why you guys still think its bad to flatsled...

pretty good track for your 3rd. just work on smoother curves and move of a trick variety Smile