new track

any pointers or tips are appreciated and STRONGLY ENCOURAGED forgot to put the link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCJcfOfDH6E

Nice for your first try!

- The beginning was pretty fluent.
- The loop (starting at 0:11) wasn't smooth. Try to create shorter lines and try to make the loop more circular.
- Right after the loop it was fakie time. I think you could make some more airtime there.
- The elevator wasn't well-executed. Bosh (the guy on the sled) hit the other wall for a little moment, then got back to the wall causing him to get flat and repeated that for like 3 times.
- I was like: ''Neat!'' at 0:25, when Bosh gets pushed back. Couldn't do that myself, honestly.
- The hyperactive mouse at 0:42 really annoyed me. Don't let the watcher see the mouse, it looks unprofessional.

Overall, it was a nice track, but don't go too far with your ''down the stairs!'' style. Make some manuals, flings, and granuals here and there and remember to keep it dense, smooth and entertaining.

well i kinda im lacking in ability do to that

It was decent, a few things

-Take your time, make it all neat
-Have some sort of a plan, don't draw lines where the rider is going. You control him, he doesn't control you
-Titles! Give your tracks cool titles, like Untitled-1. Kidding, something like Plutonium, or Ride of light or something catchy.
-Try to make it not all down right, make it go up a lot, left, right, down, diagonal, inside, outside, inverted, everything.

Just work on those and you should be fine

You are going to be a very good track-maker if you continue like this

I see you're trying some newer stuff in this one. Keep messing around with it and you'll improve. And try not to headride, it tends to look bad.

Try yo make your curves smooth. Also, Like i mentioned last time, try and pick up a copy of standalone, unless you really want to use the trap lines that disappear.

Keep practicing

oh uhm those small lines segments are used for riding on, they're supposed to be g wells. i suppose you saw that from a video and tried to do it. see a g well tut and then you'll get better i can just imagine you growing to be one of those top track makers some day. It was a very nice track for your first^^

u guys are awesome thanks for the feedback

Try some manuals. Keep xperimenting.