>> first one dont judge me<<

Pretty Kewl

small
i judged you

Very laggy.

Try and head on over to the recording center/tutorial section/help section to either learn how to record better or how to get someone else to record for you.

Not much to say about the track, it was really short . Try to make longer tracks next time.

G-wells, flings and a hand stall in your first track? Nice work, I would say.

Keep on practicing. Make your tracks longer in the future, and as Purtle said, try to get somebody to record for you, or find a tutorial so you can do it better yourself.

hey better than my first

decent work there, you have the essential concept of a fling and g wells down. work on incorperating manuals in more too. and the recording again stands out to be the worst aspect of this track, so look into what ac and purtle sed. anyway nice work, keep it up!!

Recording and editing has an important value to some people. The screen was small (don't show the standalone, just the LR screen), the recording was laggy and the editing wasn't really good. Try to improve those things.

The track itself was fine. I wouldn't combine flatsled and quirky in one track, but it's your choice ofc. Try to improve the g-well strenght and make the g-wells look more 'clean', try some manuals and the most important thing, keep practicing. You will be better once, trust me.

10 times better than my first track!
+rep

basically everybody else summed it up.

you have the basics of g-wells and stalls in your first track, which is pretty damn good.

obviously, either look at some recording/editing tutorials, or have somebody else do it.

good job +rep

that was ur first dang