Revival - SCG
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Revival - SCG
Enjoy.
https://www.linerider.com/edit/77L604/lra-track?k=5TuJy66kCZR3
SethComposerGuy- Line Rider Legend
Re: Revival - SCG
Damn that was really cool, the visuals were crazy!
I do think each section could have had a little more riding, I was hoping he'd use a lot more of the cloud than he ended up using. I think making the line clouds as dense as they were later on may have had a negative effect on viewability, it was really easy to lose track of bosh altogether. The whole highspeed animation thing was really cool, though I think it may have suffered a bit from over-animation, theres so much to keep track of that I lost focus of what bosh was actually doing. Maybe I'm just being nit-picky, it was still a really cool watch and one of my favs from you
I do think each section could have had a little more riding, I was hoping he'd use a lot more of the cloud than he ended up using. I think making the line clouds as dense as they were later on may have had a negative effect on viewability, it was really easy to lose track of bosh altogether. The whole highspeed animation thing was really cool, though I think it may have suffered a bit from over-animation, theres so much to keep track of that I lost focus of what bosh was actually doing. Maybe I'm just being nit-picky, it was still a really cool watch and one of my favs from you
Chuggers- Member
- villainous quirker
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Wow, a lot of that animation was so creative! Loved the use of the still scenery as well. Beautiful. This would definitely be one of the first tracks I show newcomers if they ask for good tracks. It's solid and creative. Love it.
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Really liked the animation bit near the end, It was however difficult to focus on both the track and animation. It was kind of like I couldnt appreciate them as a pair, I watched it a few times focusing on each and they were great on their own. Maybe I just have a weak focus. Liked the quirky cloud style too, made it fun and unpredictable!
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That was really refreshing! Loved the intensifying compact sections, the first sync really put me off. Great spin on the dotting technique as well and the whole thing is crazy cohesive.
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
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I really don't mind too much if the animation gets in the way of what Bosh is doing.
Honestly, I think it's important to try to meld bosh's movement to the animation itself but you did a magnificent job. I'm so glad contact juggling was used the way it was here, I feel like that's exactly the spirit of it. Just enough in just the right places. Especially as you just got crazily more creative with it which I could tell after having watched twice that you already had those ideas in your head, you were just careful not to use them too early. I loved the contact snakes.
At that, the actual structure of the track is neato. Especially the compact XYZ, a style I have difficulty with that I have always wanted to get better at. Fling loop recycles in XYZ ftw.
I loved this track. 9/10.
Honestly, I think it's important to try to meld bosh's movement to the animation itself but you did a magnificent job. I'm so glad contact juggling was used the way it was here, I feel like that's exactly the spirit of it. Just enough in just the right places. Especially as you just got crazily more creative with it which I could tell after having watched twice that you already had those ideas in your head, you were just careful not to use them too early. I loved the contact snakes.
At that, the actual structure of the track is neato. Especially the compact XYZ, a style I have difficulty with that I have always wanted to get better at. Fling loop recycles in XYZ ftw.
I loved this track. 9/10.
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