Pampi

My first tail fling . Thanks rabid for recording

Really starting to look good. One thing you should do is try to make your flings consistantly strong by dragging the line as far as possible, with contact points on. When he gets an orange line or is offlsed you've gone too far. Great work otherwise.

opinions
0:16 - 0:19 Unbalanced, but a nice technical improvement
0:22 - 0:24 yisssssss, easily the best variation in this track.
0:27 - 0:30 I know you can do better
0:31 - 0:32 I give zero shits about the long lines, this was really solid, especially towards the end
0:35 - 0:38 never mind, this is my favorite part. hand fling into hand+foot and some funky rotation made this part surprisingly decent
The rest is nothing surprising

It doesn't always sound like a compliment, but you're improving steadily. Overall I'd like to see less string flings, because if you're gonna do fling quirk, it is important to keep it interesting, and personally I don't find them that interesting. Either way,

nice

Sheldon wrote:Really starting to look good. One thing you should do is try to make your flings consistantly strong by dragging the line as far as possible, with contact points on. When he gets an orange line or is offlsed you've gone too far. Great work otherwise.

Actually lra makes it really easy to make flings consistently strong by dragging the line away from Bosh until he crashes. Then just hold the lifelock key while you slowly drag the line closer. The line stops moving as soon as bosh survives, and you have yourself a strong well with very little time wasted.

Also, nice track. You seem to be improving really fast so far.

You want to know how many tracks I had to release before being even half as good as you are right now? Too many.

This is pretty cool, all things considered. Has a really old ZNF feel that we don't get too much from fling quirk anymore.