Logging Camp- mmt
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Logging Camp- mmt
Hi, it's me again out with a new track I've been meaning to publish for a while but never got around to. I'ts mostly scened, with lots of little lines. enjoy!
mmtunligit- Member
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Re: Logging Camp- mmt
cool to see someone new(ish) drawing scenery!
the logs looked cool. wish you has used them more throughout the track instead of the pencil line "hills". Also, keep in mind a sense of scale - you had some logs that were twice as high as the house at the end. Just stuff to think about
Keep riding the lines
the logs looked cool. wish you has used them more throughout the track instead of the pencil line "hills". Also, keep in mind a sense of scale - you had some logs that were twice as high as the house at the end. Just stuff to think about
Keep riding the lines
Re: Logging Camp- mmt
There's something really satisfying about that little flip at 0:31.
Apple- Moderator
Re: Logging Camp- mmt
I like the look of this! Simple scenery, fun stuff! It's obvious you're improving, and the scenery was enjoyable! I'd totally recommend playing around with different scenery ideas once you get tired of drawing hills!
Also, recording and editing could definitely use a wee bit of polish, but that one's not your fault. If you want, I can record and/or edit your next track, or point you in the direction of some software!
Happy riding! B)
Also, recording and editing could definitely use a wee bit of polish, but that one's not your fault. If you want, I can record and/or edit your next track, or point you in the direction of some software!
Happy riding! B)
OTDE- Administrator
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Re: Logging Camp- mmt
Thanks! this was like the third track I made, but I only got around to posting it yesterday.
mmtunligit- Member
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Re: Logging Camp- mmt
I like the logs and stuff, but there were some things that didn't make sense. Some of those "blobs" he was riding on didn't have anything to show what they were supposed to be, like some lines show that they were rocks or clumps of grass. Other than that it reminds me of my first track I posted here back in 2012.
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