Crossed the Line
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Crossed the Line
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jIr5bO_1Tj4&feature=youtu.be
Somebody give Shotoku a cake. He needs more cake in his life for his editing service.
So, this is basically the same thing that happened with Free Verse except I suddenly gained a lot more skill than the skill I gained in Free Verse. I'm so sorry for this. Seriously.
Somebody give Shotoku a cake. He needs more cake in his life for his editing service.
So, this is basically the same thing that happened with Free Verse except I suddenly gained a lot more skill than the skill I gained in Free Verse. I'm so sorry for this. Seriously.
Last edited by Dapianokid on Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:54 pm; edited 2 times in total
ScrungleBlumpkus- Member
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Re: Crossed the Line
Okay now what's even happening I don't understand at all
Votale what have you done
Votale what have you done
ScrungleBlumpkus- Member
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Re: Crossed the Line
Somehow Rabid's WCC post is invisible and replaced the first post of this thread, but now it is Votale's music thread post.
During this whole time, it has been the same thread name by Dap, but the actual OP keeps changing and the real OP gets bumped down below it
During this whole time, it has been the same thread name by Dap, but the actual OP keeps changing and the real OP gets bumped down below it
Fauxfyre- Member
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Re: Crossed the Line
https://www.dropbox.com/s/50l5lj8vk1yqo5m/Screenshot%202014-09-27%2020.38.04.png?dl=0
Spot the funny.
Also, should I rename this thread?
Spot the funny.
Also, should I rename this thread?
ScrungleBlumpkus- Member
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Re: Crossed the Line
Fixed.
Except Rabid's WCC post is still missing.
Except Rabid's WCC post is still missing.
ScrungleBlumpkus- Member
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Re: Crossed the Line
Aaaaaanyways.....
The beginning was really lulzy, but the rest was pretty cool. At the beginning I could tell you still had problems knowing what to keep and what to delete, but near the improvement from beginning to end was probably the biggest I've seen in a single track.
Also, thanks for telling people to give me cake
The beginning was really lulzy, but the rest was pretty cool. At the beginning I could tell you still had problems knowing what to keep and what to delete, but near the improvement from beginning to end was probably the biggest I've seen in a single track.
Also, thanks for telling people to give me cake
Fauxfyre- Member
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Re: Crossed the Line
Well I will say that I can't wait to see what else you might be releasing in the near future, and you can definitely feel the improvement, but everyone's mentioned all of that already, so I might as well move on to a few tips for making it better. I feel like there were a few parts thrown in there just for the sake of throwing it in there, with the largest example standing out to me being the 45 snap section that lasted about 5 seconds total. This is a public service announcement, please pay attention, for it will only be repeated once. Not every super woah amazing track has to be an omni. I repeat, not every super woah amazing track has to be an omni. Thank you for your time.
Opal Rider- Moderator
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Re: Crossed the Line
Really entertaining track man. Loved the double hand fling loop, tracks should have more of those
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Crossed the Line
Opal Rider wrote:This is a public service announcement, please pay attention, for it will only be repeated once. Not every super woah amazing track has to be an omni. I repeat, not every super woah amazing track has to be an omni.
That's the lesson I finally learned from this track. I'mma keep it in mind.
Also, if 3rd foot pos means above sled, then I'mma try to do it out of fakie sometime.
Thanks, guyzh
ScrungleBlumpkus- Member
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Re: Crossed the Line
That's impossible, just so you knowDapianokid wrote:if 3rd foot pos means above sled, then I'mma try to do it out of fakie sometime.
https://iridethelines.forumotion.com/t10575-shotoku-explains-the-quirks-about-quirk
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