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Post by gaoyubao Sun Nov 25, 2012 5:43 pm

Remember track 4? This is also a track to make you feel better about yours.

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Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 Sun Nov 25, 2012 6:10 pm

Configured like it's clockwork, if that makes sense. Smile

I like it a lot!
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Post by Sssschiller Sun Nov 25, 2012 6:34 pm

I watched the comlete end to find out the music artist and my face was Shocked as I realized that it's Ghosty Very Happy

I liked the style! Some stuff to relax Wink
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Post by Opal Rider Sun Nov 25, 2012 9:00 pm

It's great to see you experimenting with wells like this. Once you get that down, the only thing you have to work on then is flow, which is really hard to grasp, since it's more of a feel than a technique. Not much I can tell you that'll help you to fix it, other than to work on reducing the amount of flow killers in the track, such as the stop at :34.
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Post by theacp127 Sun Nov 25, 2012 10:26 pm

Interesting flings, but there was almost no flow to the track. It felt like you just threw in a couple flings everywhere and called it a track.
I'm not saying its bad by any means, but it needed some cohesiveness.
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