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Post by jlflame2000 Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:13 am

Yo, my one year anni. I know, it's a little late.

Read my YT subscription for more info.
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Post by rich Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:11 am

I really liked how smooth the starting integration was. If the whole track was like the first 50 seconds, that would have blown my mind. I also think that your intro was a little long, I think everyone's intro shouldn't be more than say 12 seconds. I have seen so many videos where I read more than I watch tracks :/ But your track was good Smile I would love to see one with more integration like the first 50 seconds, if you could make a whole track like that I would give you 2 high fives, but for now you only get 1 high five.
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Post by Stallie Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:38 am

That was a very good track, nice manuals, good wells, but I think you could have done even better. Try making more of a variety of manuals and wells next time.
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Post by SETH Sat Feb 18, 2012 9:20 am

it's simple but pretty fun, nice track
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Post by Sssschiller Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:30 am

That was good! I didn't expected this tbh Wink cool integration and granuals!
But you should zoom in more like you did at the color replay. Smile
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Post by Inukaza Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:35 am

Stallie wrote:That was a very good track, nice manuals, good wells, but I think you could have done even better. Try making more of a variety of manuals and wells next time.

You see, even he JLflame knows what a anniversity track is supposed to be. His first published track was feb 8th, 2011. Do it right stallie.



Nice track. It really tricked me when I saw the default image youtube gave me, I thought it was going to be a nub track. When it started playing it surprised me. Good job. It reminds me of the track I entered into TOC2. (Wolf's Dream).

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Post by jlflame2000 Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:58 am

Thanks a lot for the comments! I lost inspiration a lot Sad
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Post by efrazable Sat Feb 18, 2012 4:49 pm

Use ALL the green lines!
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Post by dragonlineproductions Sat Feb 18, 2012 5:36 pm

Looks real good, nice job!
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