JLFlame-Strom Clouds
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SETH
Stallie
rich
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JLFlame-Strom Clouds
Yo, my one year anni. I know, it's a little late.
Read my YT subscription for more info.
Read my YT subscription for more info.
Re: JLFlame-Strom Clouds
I really liked how smooth the starting integration was. If the whole track was like the first 50 seconds, that would have blown my mind. I also think that your intro was a little long, I think everyone's intro shouldn't be more than say 12 seconds. I have seen so many videos where I read more than I watch tracks :/ But your track was good I would love to see one with more integration like the first 50 seconds, if you could make a whole track like that I would give you 2 high fives, but for now you only get 1 high five.
rich- Member
Re: JLFlame-Strom Clouds
That was a very good track, nice manuals, good wells, but I think you could have done even better. Try making more of a variety of manuals and wells next time.
Stallie- Member
Re: JLFlame-Strom Clouds
That was good! I didn't expected this tbh cool integration and granuals!
But you should zoom in more like you did at the color replay.
But you should zoom in more like you did at the color replay.
Sssschiller- Member
Re: JLFlame-Strom Clouds
Stallie wrote:That was a very good track, nice manuals, good wells, but I think you could have done even better. Try making more of a variety of manuals and wells next time.
You see, even he JLflame knows what a anniversity track is supposed to be. His first published track was feb 8th, 2011. Do it right stallie.
Nice track. It really tricked me when I saw the default image youtube gave me, I thought it was going to be a nub track. When it started playing it surprised me. Good job. It reminds me of the track I entered into TOC2. (Wolf's Dream).
Inukaza- Member
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