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Post by bbshabob1 Wed Sep 21, 2011 9:10 am

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Post by efrazable Wed Sep 21, 2011 12:13 pm

I liked it! But just a little critique:
1. A little short.
2. I could tell that you started rushing more and more as the track progressed.
Other than that, great song!
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Post by Votale Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:25 pm

Nice Very Happy

Also some comments: Don't spend too much time in one place; By that, I mean things such as 0:18-0:23. You see, some recycles like that seems to drag on at times. Try to avoid that.

Also, work on those manuals and flings if you wish to become a successful quirker. PRACTICE makes perfect Smile
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Post by Cereal Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:47 pm

Cliche song was cliche, but ignoring that:

I think that you have fairly strong flings, tbh. However, I would recommend practicing manuals, since they are much easier to learn than quirks. Wink

Also, kinda like Vot said, try not to have flow-killers.
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Post by Stallie Wed Sep 21, 2011 7:41 pm

Thats was pretty good, try smoothing those manuals, try strengthening your flings, and stacking helps as well, it was good over all.
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