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Post by Jam Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:29 am


ALL BLUE!
.sol

New track! (no ****)

C&C welcome, as always.


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Post by TeamBlast Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:34 am

Spoiler:
/amazed
∞/10 (Honestly the best bare track I've seen in a while.)
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Post by Jam Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:36 am

Team Blast wrote:
Spoiler:
/amazed
∞/10 (Honestly the best bare track I've seen in a while.)
Dayum. That makes me ∞ly happy!
Thanks for the comment! =)
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Post by CamQuartr Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:40 am

wow :o your improving fast

awesome speed on your flings, and nice use of different tricks

1:01 - 1:04 = sex

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Post by linerage Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:41 am

Hmm i'm surprised! I like the rough looking manuals, and the well strength wasn't bad either. I call mini-znf ;o
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Post by Jam Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:43 am

CamQuartr wrote:wow :o your improving fast

awesome speed on your flings, and nice use of different tricks

1:01 - 1:04 = sex
Thank you! =)

2 notes:
- I agree with the improving thing.
- 1:01 - 1:04 is probably my favorite part of the track.

Thanks for the comment, Cammy!

linerage wrote:Hmm i'm surprised! I like the rough looking manuals, and the well strength wasn't bad either. I call mini-znf ;o
I'm glad I was able to surprise you!

Mini-ZNF? Wow. It'd be an honor to have that be true, but it just isn't.

Thank you very much for your comment, man. =)
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Post by Gliss Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:50 am

I liked it.
Simple clean and fast.
Try to put more fling variation? the airtime at :34-:36 and the end kinda bothered me but still really good :]]

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Post by Jam Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:52 am

Gliss wrote:I liked it.
Simple clean and fast.
Try to put more fling variation? the airtime at :34-:36 and the end kinda bothered me but still really good :]]
Yay! A girl liked it! (wow, I'm an awful person)
I will try to add more types of wells in my future tracks... This real quirk stuff is just too new to me (and I've played this game for 4 years...) And airtime... Oh I hear that everytime. Shame on me... =P
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Post by Sssschiller Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:22 am

best music in a line rider track for a long time. Also awesome track. i loved the airtime :3
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Post by OTDE Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:47 am

Beautiful one. I needed a boost of inspiration, and this came in handy :P
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Post by rabid squirrel Sun Mar 27, 2011 12:12 pm

Oh boy. I dunno what it was about it but it was like taking a drink of water when you're really thirsty but don't realize it

I think I just missed tracks like this. Lots of big manuals and big flings, not afraid of airtime in the least, not afraid of simplicity, great flow, and that ClosedDo0r-esque space recycling.

Thanks for this! +rep
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Post by Chui Ninji Sun Mar 27, 2011 12:18 pm

I really enjoyed this. I don't know why, but it had that "old school" feel. Especially that huge spidey in the beginning. That just brought some reminiscing tears to my face. xD

I think the airtime in some of that was a little much, but I liked everything else. Some more tail manuals would've been nice.
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Post by Stallie Sun Mar 27, 2011 12:22 pm

That was pretty good jam. nice Arterial [Jam] 232659
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Post by chaomocha Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:26 pm

YEEEEEESSSSSS

bring back some oldschool. exactly like what rabid sed, doesnt afraid of anything. this is exactly how im trying to make my track right now, cept not all blue. nicely done, +rep
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Post by Rafael Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:34 pm

Indeed quite oldschool. Awesome job Jam, I loved it! I loved the handfling at 0:29. I haven't seen such a clean handfling in ages. Great job on all blue too!
Keep making these tracks <3
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Post by Jam Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:45 pm

Sssschiller wrote:best music in a line rider track for a long time. Also awesome track. i loved the airtime :3
Haha, yeah... Thanks man. I hate how people thing airtime is the worst thing ever...

OffTheDeepEnd wrote:Beautiful one. I needed a boost of inspiration, and this came in handy :P
Glad I could help your inspired state! =)

rabid squirrel wrote:Oh boy. I dunno what it was about it but it was like taking a drink of water when you're really thirsty but don't realize it

I think I just missed tracks like this. Lots of big manuals and big flings, not afraid of airtime in the least, not afraid of simplicity, great flow, and that ClosedDo0r-esque space recycling.

Thanks for this! +rep
Wow. Just wow. Thank you so much for this comment. It made my day. =)

Chui Ninji wrote:I really enjoyed this. I don't know why, but it had that "old school" feel. Especially that huge spidey in the beginning. That just brought some reminiscing tears to my face. xD

I think the airtime in some of that was a little much, but I liked everything else. Some more tail manuals would've been nice.
Too much emotion, sir?
And I agree that the airtime at the end was a bit too much, but originally I was syncing it to a song, but I ended up not using that because this fit better in general.

stallie wrote:That was pretty good jam. nice Arterial [Jam] 232659
Thank you!

chaomocha wrote:YEEEEEESSSSSS

bring back some oldschool. exactly like what rabid sed, doesnt afraid of anything. this is exactly how im trying to make my track right now, cept not all blue. nicely done, +rep
Old-school for the win! Thanks for the comment and rep, and make sure to let me know when you release that track! =)

Rafael wrote:Indeed quite oldschool. Awesome job Jam, I loved it! I loved the handfling at 0:29. I haven't seen such a clean handfling in ages. Great job on all blue too!
Keep making these tracks <3
Thanks Raf! Will try! =P
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Post by Wolf_Spirit Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:37 pm

I really loved the music Very Happy
The track was great to watch, you had some awesome flings there, you did them all really well! The manuals were varied, some were really balanced and perfect and others were a bit sloppy. Overall I loved the flow and it was just a great track ^^ +rep
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Post by Jam Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:03 pm

Wolf_Spirit wrote:I really loved the music Very Happy
The track was great to watch, you had some awesome flings there, you did them all really well! The manuals were varied, some were really balanced and perfect and others were a bit sloppy. Overall I loved the flow and it was just a great track ^^ +rep
Yay! Thanks!
And... Sorry about bold. =(
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Post by Cereal Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:36 pm

You've improved a bit, and your nose manuals have pretty good pressure now. It sort of reminded me of "Accelerate" From Bing.

Nice job.

EDIT: ALL BLUE? Impressive o_O
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Post by Votale Sun Mar 27, 2011 8:50 pm

Had I been drinking water, I would have spat it. Hald I spat it, my computer would boomsplode. Had my computer boomsploded, I would got on my mom's. Had I got on my mom's, I would have watched this again. Had I watched this again, I would have been drinking tea. Had I been drinking tea, I would have spat once again. Had I spat once again, my mom would kill me. Had my mom killed me, I'd be dead.

+rep ClosedDoor Jam.
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Post by Jam Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:02 pm

Cereal wrote:You've improved a bit, and your nose manuals have pretty good pressure now. It sort of reminded me of "Accelerate" From Bing.

Nice job.

EDIT: ALL BLUE? Impressive o_O
Thank you! And yes, all blue. .sol for proof 'cause I'm way too lazy to record in color. =P

Votale wrote:Had I been drinking water, I would have spat it. Hald I spat it, my computer would boomsplode. Had my computer boomsploded, I would got on my mom's. Had I got on my mom's, I would have watched this again. Had I watched this again, I would have been drinking tea. Had I been drinking tea, I would have spat once again. Had I spat once again, my mom would kill me. Had my mom killed me, I'd be dead.

+rep ClosedDoor Jam.
This made me laugh. =) Thank you very much!
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Post by Trinity37185_Rim Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:21 am

Action Panic
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Post by Jam Mon Mar 28, 2011 3:38 pm

Trinity37185_Rim wrote:Action Panic
=D

Kramwood wrote:loved it. faved.
*speechless* Too much emotion to cope with. Thank you for the fav!
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