Arterial [Jam]
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Rafael
chaomocha
Stallie
Chui Ninji
rabid squirrel
OTDE
Sssschiller
Gliss
linerage
CamQuartr
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Arterial [Jam]
ALL BLUE!
.sol
New track! (no ****)
C&C welcome, as always.
Last edited by Jam on Sun Mar 27, 2011 1:56 am; edited 1 time in total
Jam- Member
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Dayum. That makes me ∞ly happy!Team Blast wrote:/amazed
- Spoiler:
i came.
∞/10 (Honestly the best bare track I've seen in a while.)
Thanks for the comment! =)
Jam- Member
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wow :o your improving fast
awesome speed on your flings, and nice use of different tricks
1:01 - 1:04 = sex
awesome speed on your flings, and nice use of different tricks
1:01 - 1:04 = sex
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Hmm i'm surprised! I like the rough looking manuals, and the well strength wasn't bad either. I call mini-znf ;o
linerage- Member
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Thank you! =)CamQuartr wrote:wow :o your improving fast
awesome speed on your flings, and nice use of different tricks
1:01 - 1:04 = sex
2 notes:
- I agree with the improving thing.
- 1:01 - 1:04 is probably my favorite part of the track.
Thanks for the comment, Cammy!
I'm glad I was able to surprise you!linerage wrote:Hmm i'm surprised! I like the rough looking manuals, and the well strength wasn't bad either. I call mini-znf ;o
Mini-ZNF? Wow. It'd be an honor to have that be true, but it just isn't.
Thank you very much for your comment, man. =)
Jam- Member
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I liked it.
Simple clean and fast.
Try to put more fling variation? the airtime at :34-:36 and the end kinda bothered me but still really good :]]
Simple clean and fast.
Try to put more fling variation? the airtime at :34-:36 and the end kinda bothered me but still really good :]]
Gliss- Member
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Yay! A girl liked it! (wow, I'm an awful person)Gliss wrote:I liked it.
Simple clean and fast.
Try to put more fling variation? the airtime at :34-:36 and the end kinda bothered me but still really good :]]
I will try to add more types of wells in my future tracks... This real quirk stuff is just too new to me (and I've played this game for 4 years...) And airtime... Oh I hear that everytime. Shame on me... =P
Jam- Member
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best music in a line rider track for a long time. Also awesome track. i loved the airtime :3
Sssschiller- Member
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Beautiful one. I needed a boost of inspiration, and this came in handy
OTDE- Administrator
- the postham mindset
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Oh boy. I dunno what it was about it but it was like taking a drink of water when you're really thirsty but don't realize it
I think I just missed tracks like this. Lots of big manuals and big flings, not afraid of airtime in the least, not afraid of simplicity, great flow, and that ClosedDo0r-esque space recycling.
Thanks for this! +rep
I think I just missed tracks like this. Lots of big manuals and big flings, not afraid of airtime in the least, not afraid of simplicity, great flow, and that ClosedDo0r-esque space recycling.
Thanks for this! +rep
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I really enjoyed this. I don't know why, but it had that "old school" feel. Especially that huge spidey in the beginning. That just brought some reminiscing tears to my face.
I think the airtime in some of that was a little much, but I liked everything else. Some more tail manuals would've been nice.
I think the airtime in some of that was a little much, but I liked everything else. Some more tail manuals would've been nice.
Chui Ninji- Member
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YEEEEEESSSSSS
bring back some oldschool. exactly like what rabid sed, doesnt afraid of anything. this is exactly how im trying to make my track right now, cept not all blue. nicely done, +rep
bring back some oldschool. exactly like what rabid sed, doesnt afraid of anything. this is exactly how im trying to make my track right now, cept not all blue. nicely done, +rep
chaomocha- Member
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Indeed quite oldschool. Awesome job Jam, I loved it! I loved the handfling at 0:29. I haven't seen such a clean handfling in ages. Great job on all blue too!
Keep making these tracks <3
Keep making these tracks <3
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
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Haha, yeah... Thanks man. I hate how people thing airtime is the worst thing ever...Sssschiller wrote:best music in a line rider track for a long time. Also awesome track. i loved the airtime :3
Glad I could help your inspired state! =)OffTheDeepEnd wrote:Beautiful one. I needed a boost of inspiration, and this came in handy
Wow. Just wow. Thank you so much for this comment. It made my day. =)rabid squirrel wrote:Oh boy. I dunno what it was about it but it was like taking a drink of water when you're really thirsty but don't realize it
I think I just missed tracks like this. Lots of big manuals and big flings, not afraid of airtime in the least, not afraid of simplicity, great flow, and that ClosedDo0r-esque space recycling.
Thanks for this! +rep
Too much emotion, sir?Chui Ninji wrote:I really enjoyed this. I don't know why, but it had that "old school" feel. Especially that huge spidey in the beginning. That just brought some reminiscing tears to my face.
I think the airtime in some of that was a little much, but I liked everything else. Some more tail manuals would've been nice.
And I agree that the airtime at the end was a bit too much, but originally I was syncing it to a song, but I ended up not using that because this fit better in general.
Thank you!stallie wrote:That was pretty good jam. nice
Old-school for the win! Thanks for the comment and rep, and make sure to let me know when you release that track! =)chaomocha wrote:YEEEEEESSSSSS
bring back some oldschool. exactly like what rabid sed, doesnt afraid of anything. this is exactly how im trying to make my track right now, cept not all blue. nicely done, +rep
Thanks Raf! Will try! =PRafael wrote:Indeed quite oldschool. Awesome job Jam, I loved it! I loved the handfling at 0:29. I haven't seen such a clean handfling in ages. Great job on all blue too!
Keep making these tracks <3
Jam- Member
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I really loved the music
The track was great to watch, you had some awesome flings there, you did them all really well! The manuals were varied, some were really balanced and perfect and others were a bit sloppy. Overall I loved the flow and it was just a great track ^^ +rep
The track was great to watch, you had some awesome flings there, you did them all really well! The manuals were varied, some were really balanced and perfect and others were a bit sloppy. Overall I loved the flow and it was just a great track ^^ +rep
Wolf_Spirit- Member
- Retired Admin
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Yay! Thanks!Wolf_Spirit wrote:I really loved the music
The track was great to watch, you had some awesome flings there, you did them all really well! The manuals were varied, some were really balanced and perfect and others were a bit sloppy. Overall I loved the flow and it was just a great track ^^ +rep
And... Sorry about bold. =(
Jam- Member
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You've improved a bit, and your nose manuals have pretty good pressure now. It sort of reminded me of "Accelerate" From Bing.
Nice job.
EDIT: ALL BLUE? Impressive o_O
Nice job.
EDIT: ALL BLUE? Impressive o_O
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
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Had I been drinking water, I would have spat it. Hald I spat it, my computer would boomsplode. Had my computer boomsploded, I would got on my mom's. Had I got on my mom's, I would have watched this again. Had I watched this again, I would have been drinking tea. Had I been drinking tea, I would have spat once again. Had I spat once again, my mom would kill me. Had my mom killed me, I'd be dead.
+repClosedDoor Jam.
+rep
Votale- Member
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Thank you! And yes, all blue. .sol for proof 'cause I'm way too lazy to record in color. =PCereal wrote:You've improved a bit, and your nose manuals have pretty good pressure now. It sort of reminded me of "Accelerate" From Bing.
Nice job.
EDIT: ALL BLUE? Impressive o_O
This made me laugh. =) Thank you very much!Votale wrote:Had I been drinking water, I would have spat it. Hald I spat it, my computer would boomsplode. Had my computer boomsploded, I would got on my mom's. Had I got on my mom's, I would have watched this again. Had I watched this again, I would have been drinking tea. Had I been drinking tea, I would have spat once again. Had I spat once again, my mom would kill me. Had my mom killed me, I'd be dead.
+repClosedDoorJam.
Jam- Member
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=DTrinity37185_Rim wrote:Action
*speechless* Too much emotion to cope with. Thank you for the fav!Kramwood wrote:loved it. faved.
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