Re: Breakfast - HP

by Stallie Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:06 pm

That was pretty good. I enjoyed it my self. I like the high speed manuals and the ending was nice.

by **Sheldon** Sun Jan 09, 2011 3:04 pm

slow part was OK.
High speed was excelent.<-- how do u spell this
Do more high speed

by Helios Pavonine Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:07 pm

YouTube hates me.

I commanded YouTube to put up the music again (using the method which was posted on ELR), and it worked for a few days untill now.

Thanks for all the positive comments. I've been told to continue my tracks with the highspeed style, but I think that won't happen. I'm better at slow compact parts then highspeed (watch Lost Control, for example).

I might even extend Breakfast.

by TigerXLine Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:10 pm

Dispute it.... Then it works fine....

by Helios Pavonine Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:22 pm

I already did that.

by TigerXLine Tue Jan 11, 2011 4:33 pm

Sorry for your lost*

Maybe you should try to find free-of-use songs next time (yeah, i know most of them su*** (are bad)...)

by **Rafael** Thu Jan 13, 2011 4:04 pm

Rank: Beginner track:
Curves: 3/5
Style: 4/5
Flow: 4/5
Flings in it: 7/10
Direction: 9/10
Entertainment: 9/10
Amount of tricks: 9/10
Constant speed: 13/15
Speed: 15/15
Manuals: 14/15
Total: 87/100
Criticism
Really good job Podpack. You've improved a lot. I loved your highspeed! Your short tricks were really nice, but your longer manuals could need some more work. The key of highspeed nose manuals is to keep the pressure equal. The easiest way to do this is to make sure the sled goes through the line a bit. This is how you get the best manuals. Another thing that bothered me was that you slowed down a lot sometimes. Try to keep your speed more constant. A stop'n go is nice, but the "regular" speed should be a bit of the same.

by TigerXLine Thu Jan 13, 2011 6:10 pm

Hey! I'm in the inspirations ^^

That doesn't happen a lot

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