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Post by linerage Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:02 pm

this wuz a really old track. made like 3 months ago or something. Also, it wuz made at sledliner's house while he studied for his immense chinese unit tests. His computer sucks, randomly deleted lines everywhere. The high speed part was a failed attempt to be coldrider-like. The only part i was proud of in the track was the footfling and the butt fling and the inverse hand flings. enjoy anywais. if u dont like music, then mute it. I lieks tho.

o and this is my longest track. sad, eh?



@0:32 inversed hand groll
@0:34 alternating foot/inversed hand flanual/granual
@0:44 evolving fling-second peg + top nose into top nose into inversed nose into hand fling into shoulder fling.
@0.49 butt/head manual
@0:50 second peg/inversed shoulder The second peg is disconnected from bosh.
@0:52 offsled bosh alternating hand and foot stall.

Here's the muted version:


EDIT: i forgot @0:22 is butt and inversed hand fling double affected lines.


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Post by Georgio_jc Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:04 pm

I was about to say something like "this makes me addicted" or such...but then "This video contains content from Sony Music Entertainment, who has blocked it in your country on copyright grounds." D:
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Post by linerage Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:08 pm

Georgio_jc wrote:I was about to say something like "this makes me addicted" or such...but then "This video contains content from Sony Music Entertainment, who has blocked it in your country on copyright grounds." D:

oh can you try proxies? cos that works for me :o
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Post by TigerXLine Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:09 pm

Sony music Entertaintment = crap :|

Please reupload it to a different site like Vimeo
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Post by linerage Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:11 pm

i dunt have vimeo account... proxy works i think?!!?!??!
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Post by linerage Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:15 pm

kay uploading muted version rite nao.

EDIT:oops i forgot double post :P
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Post by TigerXLine Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:22 pm

its not hard to make a vimeo account :/

In Good use when this happens..
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Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:32 pm

REALLY good track. Actually reminded me of Leomur-style.
nice.
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Post by Georgio_jc Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:36 pm

Tell me what song you've used then I'll watch it again....but DAMN DUDE, you're good!
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Post by linerage Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:42 pm

Georgio_jc wrote:Tell me what song you've used then I'll watch it again....but DAMN DUDE, you're good!

uhm... it's BYOB(bring your own booze) by system of a down XD

critisizm is appreciated...


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Post by Helios Pavonine Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:43 pm

You're actually VERY good. You act like you're a newb, but you underestimate yourself. If you really want to make it into the ''big world'' I would suggest another name or capital letters and a new avatar or so. That would make you look like pro. :P
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Post by TigerXLine Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:44 pm

Amazing!

Sick stalls!
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Post by linerage Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:45 pm

Podpack wrote:You're actually VERY good. You act like you're a newb, but you underestimate yourself. If you really want to make it into the ''big world'' I would suggest another name or capital letters and a new avatar or so. That would make you look like pro. :P

but im not... by the standards of the tracks these days, im wayyy behind :P and i dont think looking like pro is gonna help me in anything xD thanks though
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Post by Derpinator Sat Nov 06, 2010 2:50 pm

linerage wrote:
Podpack wrote:You're actually VERY good. You act like you're a newb, but you underestimate yourself. If you really want to make it into the ''big world'' I would suggest another name or capital letters and a new avatar or so. That would make you look like pro. :P

but im not... by the standards of the tracks these days, im wayyy behind :P and i dont think looking like pro is gonna help me in anything xD thanks though
Now you underestimate yourself again xD you are a really talented rider.
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Post by Cereal Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:45 pm

Awesomeness, reminds me of a george and PL combination.

and @ PodPack, you don't have to have "a capital letter at the beginning of your name to make you important". (Take anomaly76 for example)
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Post by Orthuss Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:50 pm

@Pod having a capital letter at the beginning of your name doesn't make you instantly pro. I mean, look at me. Trololololol

Srsly, that's some pretty good stuff you got going there.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:54 pm

Cereal wrote:and @ PodPack, you don't have to have "a capital letter at the beginning of your name to make you important". (Take anomaly76 for example)

I think it looks cooler and I also think it represents intelligence 'cuz you actually thought about your name. :|
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Post by Georgio_jc Sat Nov 06, 2010 4:14 pm

^it's called artistic freedom 8D
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Post by CamQuartr Sat Nov 06, 2010 5:41 pm

Pros: Amazing use of tricks, and great way to show your skills

Cons: It felt like every time you built up speed, you stopped, and it ruined the flow.

Although "Stop and Go" is a very hard style, in order to do it good, you have to build up the speed faster, which i believe you can do Wink

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Post by Yobanjojoe Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:00 pm

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HOLY [I am a potty mouth]
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Post by Votale Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:43 pm

I REALLY like the style you used. I think you try to focus more on tricks than enjoyability. The tricks were great but as I read the names I was just like :S

Flow, style, tricks. This had it. I'd say you can expand more and mix it up by moving from high speed and low speed, keep us guessing with tricks like integration, etc. Be inventive, creative, anything ^^

I think you have a ton of potential in this. You got the moves, just keep expanding and being creative Very Happy


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Post by linerage Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:49 pm

Votale wrote:I REALLY like the style you used. I think you try to focus more on tricks than enjoyability. The tricks were great but as I read the name I was just like :S

Flow, style, tricks. This had it. I'd say you can expand more and mix it up by moving from high speed and low speed, keep us guessing with tricks like integration, etc. Be inventive, creative, anything ^^

I think you have a ton of potential in this. You got the moves, just keep expanding and being creative Very Happy

woah thanks! :o its just whenever i do high speed i always fail and make super evolving flings that are like fling roll without specifically rolling the rider with angled lines. kinda looks like an alt fling roll.
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Post by JoaTrades Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:08 am

Chill track ya got there. 8D The music made me lawl though. xD
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