Special Announcement

For those who remember, last year I started scening HKay's Eclipse manual track. Well, that project was never finished. I recently hit up HKay on his youtube channel and retrieved the scened part that I made. So I am proud to announce, that with my hard work, Eclipse scened will be on youtube by the end of the month!
Yeah its a little messy. I will try and finish it quick, and then throughout july I will clean it up.

The video

Oh..... I'm hoping that's not a screenshot of the scenery. Sorry, but it just looks like it's not going to be eye pleasing. Those random faces look really random and misplaced.

It's you're track though, I'm just voicing my thoughts. Good luck on the track!

Inu wrote:Oh..... I'm hoping that's not a screenshot of the scenery. Sorry, but it just looks like it's not going to be eye pleasing. Those random faces look really random and misplaced.

It's you're track though, I'm just voicing my thoughts. Good luck on the track!

It looks like crap on the screenshot, In the actual track it looks better.

I don't really like having the smilies.

The rest is...meh. Okay, could use some work. Has potential.

I really need to clean it up. And now that you guys mention it, the smileys dont look very good. They are out.

uhmm it's pretty good, except the shading could use more tidying, try to make the parallel, makes it look cooler. Advice, if you want, use X and Y lines as shades and use either X OR Y first then the darker parts put another style(if you used X first then Y), just saying how i did it x3

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So pretty much are you just gonna zome in the recording

Zoom and also guys, I have a trick up my sleve. The track might suck a bit now, but Im cleaning it up (BTW please dont post anymore guys, this post is like 2 days old and is getting bumped a little too much, I want other people to be able to see their previews too)

lol 2 days. A bump is at LEAST a week, though up to two weeks is usually fine. Plus. nobody else is posting anything in the section

im really hoping the final product is a bit better than that. anyways, it doesnt really matter if we bump considering theres barely any posting anyways.

rabid squirrel wrote:lol 2 days. A bump is at LEAST a week, though up to two weeks is usually fine. Plus. nobody else is posting anything in the section

Ur the one who infracted me for bumping one a week old rabid. Lol. Yeah guys that is the part that I made last year, not the part in progress,
THIS is the part in progress

EDIT those crappy lines are the non made rock.

Ehm. Could use a lot of work.

Random DNA in the sky?

I would suggest you would fit the ''monuments'' more in the track. Floating scenery isn't your style, as far as I can see.

Buzz wrote:

rabid squirrel wrote:lol 2 days. A bump is at LEAST a week, though up to two weeks is usually fine. Plus. nobody else is posting anything in the section

Ur the one who infracted me for bumping one a week old rabid.

Really? where? If anything, it was a warning, and I only warn people for bumping if they do it to multiple threads.

I guess that part looks better than that first part.
Now im kinda curious about the final product

Helios Pavonine wrote:Ehm. Could use a lot of work.

Random DNA in the sky?

I would suggest you would fit the ''monuments'' more in the track. Floating scenery isn't your style, as far as I can see.

The point is that the first part is like a dream, and then he goes to the real world. The dna stream is the last thing in the dream section

dna had too many lines, dna is supposed to spin like the whole time, ur is like spin then keep on that side spin then keep on taht side alot, lok @ sorvius

I didnt want to double post in the same section, so tell me if you guys like this.
EDIT: link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2vB_Zt4hrSk

double posting is posting twice in a row in the same thread. By all means go ahead and make another thread.

It was choppy where you split it, but the concept is very cool

idk but i thought Buzz was bubbles

also, the animation was choppy, but a very good concept (as what rabid said)

rabid squirrel wrote:double posting is posting twice in a row in the same thread. By all means go ahead and make another thread.

It was choppy where you split it, but the concept is very cool

Thanks. This is the first time I ever split anything. And I did this very quickly.\
EDIT- VIDEO!!!

That was a preview, if I'm right.

- You should never show a lot of the track. In my opinion, this was too much.

- You could add short clips of some entertaining or awesome parts, with effects such as fading.

- The scenery didn't look quite right. Some shadows were placed where they shouldn't be placed and the shadows at the first part weren't vertical. The lines were just floating around without a surface to stand on.

- Look at the bottom in between 0:25 and 0:26. The scenery suddenly changes. Is this because you accidentally recorded two different tracks? That would be the only option I could think of.

- The ''I Ride the Lines'' at the beginning was very choppy. Why would you even add it? It's a Line Rider track, and you probably will submit it on YouTube too.

If I'm looking to all these thoughts, I still think there needs to be done alot in the recording, editing and scenery.

The scenery change is on purpose, all things between 1 and 25 is what I did 1.5 years ago, so yeah. I might completely redo that.

to me, you just put random shading

also: no offense, but I won't like it.
(I'm saying this so I can get you motivated. okthxbai )