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Post by Chui Ninji Fri Oct 30, 2009 3:00 am

Woo... Oh yeah... by the way, this is my late anniversary/birthday track. My anni was in August. My b-day is in August. I started on LR on my birthday 8D. I'm awesome I know. I think this is my 2nd year? Maybe my 3rd. Who knows. Anyway, I have a waaaay better track coming at you. Not any time soon though.



Enjoy.
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Post by Haz Zona Fri Oct 30, 2009 4:13 am

Wow nice. Good speed, variety, flow, some strong flings and nice stall. Good work. If you got a way better track coming then its gonna be pretty good.
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Post by aspi33 Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:55 am

Awesome!
very flowish, and it has some awesome flings Very Happy
This is sorta olecool style, and i know there's much work behind this to get it look this good!
You've obviously focused on viewer entertaining ^^

Well done! Very Happy
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Post by Inukaza Fri Oct 30, 2009 6:09 am

Really goood, nothing bad except the flowkiller and the length. keep it up

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Post by Stickheadz32 Fri Oct 30, 2009 8:11 am

awesome job.

It looked like your practicing on microquirks.
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Post by Chui Ninji Fri Oct 30, 2009 4:18 pm

Haz Zona wrote:Wow nice. Good speed, variety, flow, some strong flings and nice stall. Good work. If you got a way better track coming then its gonna be pretty good.
Haha. Yeah, there were some super weak flings/wells mixed in there. xD I'd have to disagree with you on the variety, and the speed could've been better, but I guess thanks. :P

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aspi33 wrote:Awesome!
very flowish, and it has some awesome flings Very Happy
This is sorta olecool style, and i know there's much work behind this to get it look this good!
You've obviously focused on viewer entertaining ^^

Well done! Very Happy

Thanks. Yeah, I kinda forgot to mention Olecool for inspiration. :P I watched revival soooo many times for inspiration while making this. 8D

Inukaza wrote:Really goood, nothing bad except the flowkiller and the length. keep it up

Yeah. When I made it, I thought it was a nice break from the speed. Looking at it now, it was a really bad idea. I assume you're talking about 0:24. The fraptastic rolling. xD

Stickheadz32 wrote:awesome job.

It looked like your practicing on microquirks.

Microquirks aren't really my thing. I just like small lines. They make me happy. :|
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Post by Cereal Fri Oct 30, 2009 4:24 pm

well... that's another person who is better than me xD

Love yer tracks Chewy :3
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Post by CamQuartr Fri Oct 30, 2009 4:26 pm

daang, impressive.

wish it was a biit longer though

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Post by Chui Ninji Fri Oct 30, 2009 4:30 pm

CamQuartr wrote:daang, impressive.

wish it was a biit longer though

Same here. :|
I just don't have the patience to go much past 30 second tracks though. >.>
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Post by baconat0r Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:35 pm

Very nice good speed and flow.. 10/10

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Post by Rafael Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:59 pm

You're AWESOME!! You got really good! Reminded my of Revival (Ole), Keep it up!
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Post by Chui Ninji Sat Oct 31, 2009 12:34 am

Rafael wrote:You're AWESOME!! You got really good! Reminded my of Revival (Ole), Keep it up!
Ahaha. That would be expected because I watched Revival 700000000 times for inspiration. 8D
Thanks. :3
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