Onrush
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Stickheadz32
Inukaza
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Haz Zona
Chui Ninji
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Onrush
Woo... Oh yeah... by the way, this is my late anniversary/birthday track. My anni was in August. My b-day is in August. I started on LR on my birthday . I'm awesome I know. I think this is my 2nd year? Maybe my 3rd. Who knows. Anyway, I have a waaaay better track coming at you. Not any time soon though.
Enjoy.
Enjoy.
Chui Ninji- Member
Re: Onrush
Wow nice. Good speed, variety, flow, some strong flings and nice stall. Good work. If you got a way better track coming then its gonna be pretty good.
Haz Zona- Member
Re: Onrush
Awesome!
very flowish, and it has some awesome flings
This is sorta olecool style, and i know there's much work behind this to get it look this good!
You've obviously focused on viewer entertaining ^^
Well done!
very flowish, and it has some awesome flings
This is sorta olecool style, and i know there's much work behind this to get it look this good!
You've obviously focused on viewer entertaining ^^
Well done!
Re: Onrush
Haha. Yeah, there were some super weak flings/wells mixed in there. I'd have to disagree with you on the variety, and the speed could've been better, but I guess thanks.Haz Zona wrote:Wow nice. Good speed, variety, flow, some strong flings and nice stall. Good work. If you got a way better track coming then its gonna be pretty good.
Lolicritiquemyself
aspi33 wrote:Awesome!
very flowish, and it has some awesome flings
This is sorta olecool style, and i know there's much work behind this to get it look this good!
You've obviously focused on viewer entertaining ^^
Well done!
Thanks. Yeah, I kinda forgot to mention Olecool for inspiration. I watched revival soooo many times for inspiration while making this.
Inukaza wrote:Really goood, nothing bad except the flowkiller and the length. keep it up
Yeah. When I made it, I thought it was a nice break from the speed. Looking at it now, it was a really bad idea. I assume you're talking about 0:24. The fraptastic rolling.
Stickheadz32 wrote:awesome job.
It looked like your practicing on microquirks.
Microquirks aren't really my thing. I just like small lines. They make me happy.
Chui Ninji- Member
Re: Onrush
well... that's another person who is better than me
Love yer tracks Chewy :3
Love yer tracks Chewy :3
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Onrush
CamQuartr wrote:daang, impressive.
wish it was a biit longer though
Same here.
I just don't have the patience to go much past 30 second tracks though. >.>
Chui Ninji- Member
Re: Onrush
You're AWESOME!! You got really good! Reminded my of Revival (Ole), Keep it up!
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Onrush
Ahaha. That would be expected because I watched Revival 700000000 times for inspiration.Rafael wrote:You're AWESOME!! You got really good! Reminded my of Revival (Ole), Keep it up!
Thanks. :3
Chui Ninji- Member
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