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Post by Pawel3 Tue May 21, 2013 10:21 am

https://youtu.be/ds5JEK2gyxg
another track by me 8D
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Post by LineMagiX Tue May 21, 2013 11:22 am

Lot's of unique parts, stops, and manuals! Respect for doing most of the integrations without green lines (I like this because it's more true to the track and shows more effort).

Only area I feel you can improve on in this track was that there were a few slow/weak parts that kinda dragged and took away from the "flow".

Solid track. Keep it up. Thumbs Up
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Post by efrazable Tue May 21, 2013 11:41 am

Luv experimental tracks
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Post by rabid squirrel Tue May 21, 2013 12:49 pm

you're quite good at this game good sir
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Post by Fauxfyre Tue May 21, 2013 2:17 pm

There where some awesome moves that I hardly and/or never see, but the track wasn't as consistent as some of your other stuff has been. Some tricks seemed exceedingly weak, dunno if that was intentional or not, but I didn't care for those parts at all.

Still, overall a neat track with some neat tricks.

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Post by theacp127 Tue May 21, 2013 2:39 pm

It seemed to go between good tricks and weak tricks. Good over all, but not your best.
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Post by Chuggers Tue May 21, 2013 3:16 pm

someone finally does the simulated fakie flatsled!


i was so happy when i saw that
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Post by Stallie Tue May 21, 2013 4:44 pm

I like those manual switches and those curves are good as well. I like those wells and especially those granuals too. I also notice how flowing it was and sync was alright to the track. Now overall I thought it was a very nice track, keep it up.
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Post by Cereal Tue May 21, 2013 4:48 pm

I hope that this Parker is of the Trey variety.

Such a surreal track.... while it was a bit inconsistent with its flow as shotoku mentioned, I was surprised at the strength of some of those tricks. I've never seen a horizontal 2nd peg flanual like that before. Overall, all the really neat tricks more than make up for the choppy flow. Smile
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Post by Wizzy Tue May 21, 2013 6:46 pm

~boo wrote:Lot's of unique parts, stops, and manuals! Respect for doing most of the integrations without green lines (I like this because it's more true to the track and shows more effort).

As time goes on, people start to agree with me more and more :facepalm:

Watched this on youtube earlier. Just fantastic, there were a lot of very cool flips and awesome moments. I thought of anomaly a few times while watching this and I think that says quite a lot. Awesome job, I look forward to your next one!
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Post by Sheldon Tue May 21, 2013 9:11 pm

The first section was much better than the second. The highspeed was a bit underpressured, but that will come with time. Stick with the manual integration, you are great at that!
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Post by Opal Rider Tue May 21, 2013 9:36 pm

I loved quite a few moments, and style wise, the track fit quite nicely as a whole. I just feel like it lacked coherency between tricks. It was as if you merely focused on doing "this", and then doing "that", and what came between this and that was relatively nonexistent. Once you get that down, I think we may have an act going.

Also, "Bring salad up, bring salad down. Left unstocked, gotta tear the frown." I think we have my new favorite misheard lyrics in a linerider song.
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Post by Pawel3 Wed May 22, 2013 9:54 am

Opal Rider wrote:I loved quite a few moments, and style wise, the track fit quite nicely as a whole. I just feel like it lacked coherency between tricks. It was as if you merely focused on doing "this", and then doing "that", and what came between this and that was relatively nonexistent. Once you get that down, I think we may have an act going.
Thanks I'll take that as a hint Very Happy
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Post by shammies Wed May 22, 2013 7:40 pm

I say keep making stuff like this.
So much more enjoyable to watch when styles blend into each other: creating a harsh contrast is always welcome in my book.

Keep on making amazing tracks bro! Thumbs Up
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