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something i made really quickly

Nice! Some of those flips were pretty cool, and the recycling was inventive and entertaining. From here, I'd suggest putting a little time into work with manuals if you're looking for a direction to pursue in trackmaking; you've got curves and flow pretty good, and if you want, you could certainly refine your abilities. Just a suggestion, of course; do what you enjoy. I, for one, definitely enjoyed this

That, to me, was like 1473 at the noobiest. The recycles, the curves that were used half for one part of the track and half for the other, felt very stylish to me. Of course, you'll improve you skills, but it was a very enjoyable track, especially that recycle that reused almost all the track.

Also, dat peg manual.

Recycles were pretty good, curves, I feel like you could've done better. Actually, I know you could've, you had some mildly decent ones in your scenery tracks. Gotta take your time with this stuff, and you'll find yourself getting better in no time. Patience, young padawan.

The biggest issue was the flow. The parts where Bosh kind of derpily stopped moving, rolled over his face, then continued made the track seem clumsy and not a lot of effort put into it. However, your flatsled was pretty good. Excellent entries into the curves, and a lot of good recycling. Just put a little more thought into how smooth the track moves along, and your tracks will look loads better in no time.

Yo that was awesome for only an hour! You should make more of these sort of tracks, where he's just actually RIDING the lines haha! Loved the recycles too; I think the moment in trackmaking when the recycle actually works is the best feeling. Nice job.

I like how ya'll are trying to make people stay here.

Rainbow Dash wrote:I like how ya'll are trying to make people stay here.

i like how they treat people thats why im still here. its better than my school. so im on here a lot

Danthetubaman wrote:

Rainbow Dash wrote:I like how ya'll are trying to make people stay here.

i like how they treat people thats why im still here. its better than my school. so im on here a lot

Damn Inu, he just told you

Just keep working on the basics. To get smoother curves, try using smaller lines. It takes longer but it makes a big difference. Plus it allows for tighter curves at higher speeds since there are to bumps to mess it up.