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Post by Apple Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:53 pm

FIrst track in two years. I'm pretty happy with it.

Sorry about the crappy quality. I think that is from it uploading straight from iMovie instead of exporting it like I used to.



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Post by [senpai] kevans Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:55 pm

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Post by gaoyubao Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:57 pm

The quality wasn't bad. The video and the track, that is. I liked the recycling.
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Post by Yobanjojoe Tue Apr 23, 2013 11:00 pm

Glad to have you back shua.
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Post by efrazable Tue Apr 23, 2013 11:15 pm

1. Can balance manuals? Check
2. Knows G-Well Basics? Check
3. Humble? Check
4. Didn't use bad music? Check
5. Can do flings well? Check
6. Decent length track? Check
7. Can edit track well? Check
8. Density? Check
9. Good flow? Check
10. Didn't have extremely long intro? Nope

E.C. Scenery attempt extra credit? Nope

Sorry, you were one off. 9/10 for first track. Feel good about that coz I gave myself a 4 for my first track. Most people get 6s or 7s.

Plz stay.
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Post by Opal Rider Tue Apr 23, 2013 11:18 pm

Definitely had that oldschool feel to it. Me likey.
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Post by Fauxfyre Tue Apr 23, 2013 11:26 pm

That track had all my favorite things about LR.

Flings
Recycles
Compactness
Fakie manuals & airtime
Flow
Great music
All blue
Stalls involving the hand

Great job! Thumbs Up

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Post by Cereal Tue Apr 23, 2013 11:28 pm

Glad you're back, Shua! I'm surprised by how skillful this track is - it especially had great space recycling.

My word of advice is to make the tricks 'flow together' a bit more smoothly. Besides that, it definitely has the quirky feel to it. Thumbs Up
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Post by Pawel3 Wed Apr 24, 2013 5:11 am

Loved those quirky movements! Very Happy
That was really fun to watch
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Post by n00bskoolbus Wed Apr 24, 2013 3:55 pm

This is great! Good reuse of space and lines. Music fit pretty well too, keep it up!
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Post by roflmaoqwerty Wed Apr 24, 2013 4:35 pm

The space recycling was ree-dik-uh-luss Very Happy

Awesome track, great to have you back in the game!
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Post by theacp127 Wed Apr 24, 2013 7:53 pm

That was awesome dude. I've never seen any of your tracks before so seeing this was a treat.
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