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Hey!
This is my first video ever, and i'd LOVE some comments
I've been playing a bit, and now i finally got a video out.
PS. Im only 10 years old...



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Thanks for watching! -Haak93

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First I thought that would be an aspi' production!

Anyway very good first track; try to make your manuals smoother!

Keep it up!

Haak93 wrote:PS. Im only 10 years old

well, that was confusing, it says haak93, sound like your 16 or 15, but age doesnt count when ur playing a game, if i was 60, u could still beat me, even tho ur 10, understand?

well, its a good track, but u have to remove those shadows which suddently appears in the air, it doesnt make any sense, try to work on some smoothness on the lines and u'll be a great rider

• i thought your manuals were un smooth at times.
  
• were you the scener?
  
• it doesn't matter that you are 10 years old linerider is for all awesome ages.
  
• some of the scenry felt a bit sloppy in my opinion.
  
• was really good for your first track.
  
• and last but not least. improve on the above and continue making awesome tracks
  

I think in a while you'll be as awesome as awesome waffles 8P

• 
  

pretty nice, looks like you've watched some tutorials

Try to make your stuff a bit smoother, look at this tut:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gfiHUZeSae8

Also, are you Dutch?

WHAT AN AWESOME TRACK!
And you're only 10 years old!
Amazing!

The scenery totally pwns, and the starting monument is just unbelievable

Keep on riding!

inb4 next LR scenery prodigy

also your 10 years old and understand how to use vegas(or an other videoediting program, Looks like vegas though)? O.O

damn your a smart guy

CamQuartr wrote:inb4 next LR scenery prodigy

also your 10 years old and understand how to use vegas(or an other videoediting program, Looks like vegas though)? O.O

damn your a smart guy

maybe he's lying? his name is haak93, like in 1993, but i dont think so, he might got a father to help or something...

MartinJulenissen wrote:

CamQuartr wrote:inb4 next LR scenery prodigy

also your 10 years old and understand how to use vegas(or an other videoediting program, Looks like vegas though)? O.O

damn your a smart guy

maybe he's lying? his name is haak93, like in 1993, but i dont think so, he might got a father to help or something...

it' says in thr the credits that aspi helped

Nice job for your first video.

some things though, a couple manuals were wobbly.
Un-necessary scening in some parts, not enough in others.


And maybe this is just me, but he went through a mountain. I think thats a no no.


Nevertheless AWESOME TRACK, 10 years old and pwns me. I think i go back under my rock now.

MartinJulenissen wrote:

CamQuartr wrote:inb4 next LR scenery prodigy

also your 10 years old and understand how to use vegas(or an other videoediting program, Looks like vegas though)? O.O

damn your a smart guy

maybe he's lying? his name is haak93, like in 1993, but i dont think so, he might got a father to help or something...

I am his neighbour.
He is 9 years, becoming 10 VERY soon now...
I helped him with editing

also, the Haak93 was because almoust every other "Haak" name was used (His name is Håkon/Haakon), and he has always used 93 in other games.

Awesome sauce scenery for a first track!

Tip: try to make the scenery consistent - as in, have scenery everywhere the screen goes, instead of very detailed scenery in only some places.

Make moar videos!

aspi33 wrote:

MartinJulenissen wrote:

CamQuartr wrote:inb4 next LR scenery prodigy

also your 10 years old and understand how to use vegas(or an other videoediting program, Looks like vegas though)? O.O

damn your a smart guy

maybe he's lying? his name is haak93, like in 1993, but i dont think so, he might got a father to help or something...

I am his neighbour.
He is 9 years, becoming 10 VERY soon now...
I helped him with editing

also, the Haak93 was because almoust every other "Haak" name was used (His name is Håkon/Haakon), and he has always used 93 in other games.

Well thats nice of you

aspi33 wrote:

MartinJulenissen wrote:

CamQuartr wrote:inb4 next LR scenery prodigy

also your 10 years old and understand how to use vegas(or an other videoediting program, Looks like vegas though)? O.O

damn your a smart guy

maybe he's lying? his name is haak93, like in 1993, but i dont think so, he might got a father to help or something...

I am his neighbour.
He is 9 years, becoming 10 VERY soon now...
I helped him with editing

also, the Haak93 was because almoust every other "Haak" name was used (His name is Håkon/Haakon), and he has always used 93 in other games.

another norwegian? yay

rabid squirrel wrote:Awesome sauce scenery for a first track!

Tip: try to make the scenery consistent - as in, have scenery everywhere the screen goes, instead of very detailed scenery in only some places.

Make moar videos!

What he says. and the same thing about the manuals, also, when Bosh is flying through the air, try to make sure he's always doing something, even if its just spinning.