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Post by rabid squirrel on Tue Jun 27, 2017 1:41 pm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qsd0Ap5W3ts

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Post by Apple on Tue Jun 27, 2017 2:32 pm

Beautiful.

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Rutabaga - Marble Soda - Sausage Rolls and Chips and Queso - Nonsense - The Sketchbook Sessions  Hummingbird - midnight adventure

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Here - Hello How Are You - 12 Juin 3049 - The Mountain Will Fall - LYI - RINGS - Rigamortis

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Calamari!! - Hasta la Raiź
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Post by OTDE on Tue Jun 27, 2017 8:55 pm

Nice track! Really good for someone who just started. Try adding more manuals and experimenting with gravity wells. Make the manuals more circular if you can—some of them were kind of messy.

I look forward to seeing more from you—keep it up! Smile

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Post by SPL4SHZ0N3 on Tue Jun 27, 2017 9:18 pm

"How do you critique Line Rider tracks these days? Who knows? No one knows... You don't. You just don't. You just throw up your hands and say 'That was good... do more!'" - Rabid Squirrel


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Post by rabid squirrel on Wed Jun 28, 2017 12:25 am

@SPL4SHZ0N3 wrote:"How do you critique Line Rider tracks these days?  Who knows?  No one knows... You don't.  You just don't.  You just throw up your hands and say 'That was good... do more!'" - Rabid Squirrel
xD

Criticizing art is hard, and subjective, but I think OTDE and I have been getting better at it since I said that. Though that is ofc a subjective opinion, heh

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Post by Sheldon on Wed Jun 28, 2017 11:35 pm

Needs more pencil tool.
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