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Linerider: Frosted 3 Original

Post by Stallie on Sat Jun 08, 2013 7:29 pm

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Re: Linerider: Frosted 3 Original

Post by gaoyubao on Sat Jun 08, 2013 8:17 pm

That was really nice. Very rhythmic stop-n-go.

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Re: Linerider: Frosted 3 Original

Post by Chuggers on Sat Jun 08, 2013 8:21 pm

Not bad, not amazing, but pretty good! There was a bit of inconsistency in the speed and how he moved, but other than that it was a pretty solid track.


Also by "original" you mean "unscened", right? Just guessing because you usually scene the frosted tracks.

hopefully theres not a bunch of idiots misunderstanding what you meant by original

im also predicting tens of thousands of completely "funny" stallie style comments
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Re: Linerider: Frosted 3 Original

Post by roflmaoqwerty on Sat Jun 08, 2013 8:37 pm

Pretty solid track! Some of it felt kinda forced, but hey, that's XY for ya; you're developing a very unique and entertaining XY style. Not bad at all. Thumbs Up

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Re: Linerider: Frosted 3 Original

Post by Fauxfyre on Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:03 pm

Nice xy, I especially liked how the pace was consistent the whole way through, making it feel very relaxed, which went along well with the music choice. The only things that seemed a little weird to me was pinches, as the direction they created interrupted the flowyness, without adding much extra speed or power.

Altogether, pretty good xy track, I like the more relaxed feel and it has just at the right speed where it didn't get boring.

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Re: Linerider: Frosted 3 Original

Post by OTDE on Sat Jun 08, 2013 9:29 pm

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Re: Linerider: Frosted 3 Original

Post by ACwazHere on Sun Jun 09, 2013 1:43 am

Dude that was totally good. It started off awesome and became slightly less cool after about 25 or so seconds, but foreal keep doing XY and you'll be totally awesome really soon. Editing and music choice were great.

I did notice how you seemed to land him on a flat line for a second and then go off in some other direction -- you seemed to do that a few too many times. That's the only specific thing I could pick out. Overall I'd say watch a bunch of XY tracks, try to mess around and think of some cool maneuvers and keep up the good work Very Happy

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Re: Linerider: Frosted 3 Original

Post by theacp127 on Sun Jun 09, 2013 3:08 pm

Nice man. Nice track and a great editing job.

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Re: Linerider: Frosted 3 Original

Post by efrazable on Sun Jun 09, 2013 8:13 pm

I really did like it, but there's nothing wrong with doing your own thing and being creative. Do things that aren't seen every day if you can.
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