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Post by Danthedragonman Thu May 30, 2013 10:20 pm


if you want to scene this ill give you the .sol
credit to kevansevans for recording the color for me thanks bro
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Post by Stallie Thu May 30, 2013 10:26 pm

I see a lot of recycles which is not bad but those curves could be a lot smoother. The flow was alright as well as the sync too. Overall that was a decent track, just keep improving your riding and keep being inspired.
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Post by theacp127 Thu May 30, 2013 10:53 pm

Try to avoid all the head riding. It really looks sloppy and like you didn't try. Flat sledding looks better when Bosh doesn't stop moving or drags slowly. Keep working. I can tell your starting to undertand, but take a look at some of the other videos then try your best to do the things that they are doing right.
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Post by OTDE Thu May 30, 2013 10:58 pm

Hey, not bad! A couple things though:

One: Given your sense of direction and structure, I think you're ready to up your game and work with manuals. Get someone from the LCC who isn't constantly lurking like I do to teach you how to balance manuals. You'll get a huge sense of accomplishment after you start chainin' them together.

Two:

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Everyone and their dog has used Paralyzer at some point. If you want your tracks to stand out in people's minds, pick a unique song.

Fun to watch, I want to see more from you!
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Post by rabid squirrel Fri May 31, 2013 12:20 am

OTDE wrote:Get someone from the LCC who isn't constantly lurking like I do to teach you how to balance manuals.
Most people who have a released a track know a thing or two about balancing manuals so you might try just hanging out in the stream.

Or watch the classic tutorial by DaPoe. a bit outdated but a good starting point: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InmRD7F_rgI
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Post by Cereal Fri May 31, 2013 1:59 am

Hey, nice recycling man! I can see some experimentation going on.

If you're curious as to how balancing nose manuals work, just keep in mind that forward red tips bosh back and shifted red tips bosh forward. Wink
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Post by Danthedragonman Fri May 31, 2013 7:22 am

rabid: ill watch it when i get home
cereal: i got that thank you i figured the red lines in my track i did called Comin' 'round the mountain. i did a manual in that.
everybody:thanks for the criticism its great to know y'all care
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