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Post by Fauxfyre on Thu Feb 07, 2013 5:11 am


I'm really happy with how this turned out. I hope you enjoy!


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Post by Wolf_Spirit on Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:34 am

Woah.
That was just amazing, enjoyed watching it so much!

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Post by theacp127 on Thu Feb 07, 2013 8:59 am

Amazing track. The bronie stuff was overkill and it took away from the presentation. It would have been better to put some cool rock song in there not a song about smiling, but a completely amazing track nonetheless.

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Re: Smile

Post by Opal Rider on Thu Feb 07, 2013 11:54 am

Well, it definitely lived up to its name. Very Happy Some of those sync moments were amazing, and the rolls were top notch quality. The only thing that I didn't especially enjoy was the alt quirk, which I found sort of funny, anyways, because it kicked in right at the sad part of the song.


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Re: Smile

Post by shammies on Thu Feb 07, 2013 12:04 pm

Bravo!
The ending is what made it for me; dat awesome speed and sync.
Glad to see you finished this and got it out there.
Amazing job! Makes me wanna try out fling quirk... almost

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Re: Smile

Post by gaoyubao on Thu Feb 07, 2013 5:20 pm

that
was
beautiful

It made me...
SMILE.

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Re: Smile

Post by Chuggers on Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:02 pm

damn that shoulder pinch recycle was genius

i cant get over it
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Post by roflmaoqwerty on Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:16 pm

That last part... O.o

This was gorgeous.

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Re: Smile

Post by Fauxfyre on Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:23 pm

Kramwood wrote:Holy fudge wat the shiz
Eep
@Wolf_Spirit wrote:Woah.
That was just amazing, enjoyed watching it so much!
Very Happy
@theacp127 wrote:Amazing track. The bronie stuff was overkill and it took away from the presentation. It would have been better to put some cool rock song in there not a song about smiling, but a completely amazing track nonetheless.
In case you didn't notice, this is synced, and I chose the song before I started making the track. Still glad you liked the track! 8D
@Opal Rider wrote:Gah, and I have to wait the entire day. ;-; I'll edit this comment later.
Looking forward to it!
@shammies wrote:Bravo!
The ending is what made it for me; dat awesome speed and sync.
Glad to see you finished this and got it out there.
Amazing job! Makes me wanna try out fling quirk... almost
It wouldn't have been finished if it wasn't for you coaxing me to come back throughout December
@gaoyubao wrote:that
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It made me...
SMILE.
That's what I was aiming for 8D
@Chuggers wrote:damn that shoulder pinch recycle was genius

i cant get over it
Glad you enjoyed that Very Happy Recycles are the best
@roflmaoqwerty wrote:That last part... O.o

This was gorgeous.
Seems to be everyone's favorite part. And thank you Smile

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Re: Smile

Post by Cereal on Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:35 pm

Really solid fling quirk! I always thought that this style "wasn't for you" based on your comment on Phlotation (xD), but if that's the case, props to mastering it.

It seems to me that once you get a new trick established, you can follow through with it extremely well. One improvement to consider would be the transitions between tricks.

But excellent job on this 3 minute track, nice creativity with those recycles, and I just hope there wasn't any music syncing because I definitely had to mute it. 2 cents

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Re: Smile

Post by Fauxfyre on Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:59 pm

@Cereal wrote:Really solid fling quirk! I always thought that this style "wasn't for you" based on your comment on Phlotation (xD), but if that's the case, props to mastering it.

It seems to me that once you get a new trick established, you can follow through with it extremely well. One improvement to consider would be the transitions between tricks.

But excellent job on this 3 minute track, nice creativity with those recycles, and I just hope there wasn't any music syncing because I definitely had to mute it. 2 cents
I just rewatched Phlotation and I honestly cannot remember why I said that. I like the track now, I think it might have just been either that I disliked how the music fit the track or that I disliked the lack of manuals. Fling quirk is definitely for me. I started this track about the time I posted on Phlotation.
I also still dislike the color playback because of the bastardization of a song from my childhood :|
I'm glad you liked the track 8D I'm not sure what you mean by improving transitions. Do you mean make them smoother, more technical, or what? I'm sorry you didn't want to watch it with the music, but could you perhaps skip to the color playback? I had put a piano arrangement of the same song to it, so the syncs are still on cue for the most part, it's just off tempo a little because the performer played at a different speed than the song regularly is.

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Re: Smile

Post by Sheldon on Fri Feb 08, 2013 9:14 am

That manual recycle as a pinch was very creative. Shotoku for LCC?
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Re: Smile

Post by Helios Pavonine on Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:20 pm

Not a big fan of the song, but the track was sooo epic! Really enjoyable.

Moar of this. Eep

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Post by Fauxfyre on Fri Feb 08, 2013 1:44 pm

@Opal Rider wrote:Well, it definitely lived up to its name. Very Happy Some of those sync moments were amazing, and the rolls were top notch quality. The only thing that I didn't especially enjoy was the alt quirk, which I found sort of funny, anyways, because it kicked in right at the sad part of the song.
I can see why you would dislike those parts. I didn't want to do something really fast or powerful at those parts (because of the music) which seems to be the norm for alt-quirk, so it seems reasonable why you wouldn't like those as much. Glad you liked most of the rest of the track though Smile
@Sheldon wrote:That manual recycle as a pinch was very creative. Shotoku for LCC?
I'm dying over here.
@Helios Pavonine wrote:Not a big fan of the song, but the track was sooo epic! Really enjoyable.

Moar of this. Eep
Happy you liked watching it! I have plenty more ideas for tracks, so moar is coming Wink

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Re: Smile

Post by TeamBlast on Sat Feb 09, 2013 10:49 pm

Dear god I can't even make a joke about this.

The last 1.5min of the track made me almost shit myself.

I second Sheldon's recommendation.

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Re: Smile

Post by Cereal on Sat Feb 09, 2013 11:13 pm

By "transitions" I mean the way that you go from one trick to another. Part of good flow is trying to avoid anything from looking 'stilted.' (I hope this makes sense)

Oh, and that song was "FFVI With Beerics" from brentalfloss, lel.

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Re: Smile

Post by Rafael on Sun Feb 10, 2013 8:19 am

The ending was really impressive. You really see the evolution of skill in tracks of this length. Very impressive job Shotoku.
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Post by Fauxfyre on Sun Feb 10, 2013 2:23 pm

@Rafael wrote:The ending was really impressive. You really see the evolution of skill in tracks of this length. Very impressive job Shotoku.
Yeah, I've got to say I have a lot more appreciation for Jam now 8D

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Re: Smile

Post by Stallie on Wed Feb 13, 2013 11:23 pm

Those wells are very good but your quirking could use some work, and also the style and density where good as well, overall that was really good.
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