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Post by Fauxfyre on Mon Nov 12, 2012 12:16 am


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Post by Guest on Mon Nov 12, 2012 12:29 am

your manuals could still be a lot better but they have improved. nice job!

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Post by Hedgehogs4Me on Mon Nov 12, 2012 12:48 am

Kind of reminds me of a better version of this. Nostalgia thread jack

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Post by crash2burn on Mon Nov 12, 2012 4:56 am

Your manuals could have been more balanced, but it was nice overall. The variety of manuals and tricks is good. Also, your curves could be much better and smoother. great job 8D

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Post by Opal Rider on Mon Nov 12, 2012 11:51 am

Some of the manuals were actually pretty good. That giant circle near the bottom was surprisingly well balanced compared to the rest, and the slower ones near the beginning were pretty good as well. However, the consistency was a bit off, as some were definitely better than others.

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Post by Sssschiller on Mon Nov 12, 2012 1:23 pm

sorvius feeling!!

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Post by ACwazHere on Mon Nov 12, 2012 2:10 pm

Your manuals could have been more balanced
I read this as "Your mother could have been more balanced" at first. But I kind of agree. Otherwise, it was a very well made track! Highspeed is hard. I don't have the patience for that, so I commend you. Keep it up bro. =)

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Post by bbshabob1 on Mon Nov 12, 2012 5:02 pm

music was awesome for the track i cant criticise cause your better than me so

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Re: Shotoku ~ Gaea's Cradle

Post by roflmaoqwerty on Mon Nov 12, 2012 9:16 pm

I just wanna say those nose loops near the end were pimp.
I gotta hand it to you, highspeed manuals are the bane of my existence and you pulled 'em off not half bad, balance aside.
If you won't scene it, you may want to consider giving it to a scener who wants material to work with. I'd personally love to see this scened, regardless of who scenes it. Very Happy

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Re: Shotoku ~ Gaea's Cradle

Post by Fauxfyre on Mon Nov 12, 2012 9:56 pm

Kramwood wrote:your manuals could still be a lot better but they have improved. nice job!
Thanks! I certainly noticed improvement myself even just from the beginning to the end of the track.
@Hedgehogs4Me wrote:Kind of reminds me of a better version of this. Nostalgia thread jack
That means a lot to me, thanks!
@crash2burn wrote:Your manuals could have been more balanced, but it was nice overall. The variety of manuals and tricks is good. Also, your curves could be much better and smoother. great job 8D
No comment. :|
@Opal Rider wrote:Some of the manuals were actually pretty good. That giant circle near the bottom was surprisingly well balanced compared to the rest, and the slower ones near the beginning were pretty good as well. However, the consistency was a bit off, as some were definitely better than others.
Yeah, this has been in progress for awhile and my technique improved a lot from the beginning to the end, so I can understand where you're seeing inconsistency.
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Your manuals could have been more balanced
I read this as "Your mother could have been more balanced" at first. But I kind of agree. Otherwise, it was a very well made track! Highspeed is hard. I don't have the patience for that, so I commend you. Keep it up bro. =)
Thanks! I find it easier to balance high-speed manuals for some reason.
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@bbshabob1 wrote:music was awesome for the track i cant criticise cause your better than me so
I'm glad somebody agreed the music was awesome for a track, because I certainly thought so.
@roflmaoqwerty wrote:I just wanna say those nose loops near the end were pimp.
I gotta hand it to you, highspeed manuals are the bane of my existence and you pulled 'em off not half bad, balance aside.
If you won't scene it, you may want to consider giving it to a scener who wants material to work with. I'd personally love to see this scened, regardless of who scenes it. Very Happy
I asked a bunch of people to scene it but they didn't want to D: Also those loops near the end were the pimpest things I've ever done 8D

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Re: Shotoku ~ Gaea's Cradle

Post by crash2burn on Mon Nov 12, 2012 10:35 pm

No comment.

I'm trying to give you some feedback Suspicious
lol 8D

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Re: Shotoku ~ Gaea's Cradle

Post by Fauxfyre on Tue Nov 13, 2012 12:24 am

@crash2burn wrote:
No comment.

I'm trying to give you some feedback Suspicious
lol 8D
It seemed like a Stallie comment Suspicious

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Post by crash2burn on Tue Nov 13, 2012 7:31 pm

A stallie comment? What's wrong with me Suspicious

also, feedback makes you get better.. you have potential :P

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Re: Shotoku ~ Gaea's Cradle

Post by theacp127 on Fri Nov 16, 2012 9:20 am

I'm amazed at how close your style and my style have in common. We have our differences but there are a lot of similarities.

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