Reach - Wizzy
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Reach - Wizzy
A monstrosity piece of crap.
Quicknotes:
-I apologize in advance for the overall monotony of the speed.
-The song I originally chose was a little slow and didn't sync as well as I had planned, and the track turned out faster than I anticipated. The song in this track isn't my favorite but fits quite nicely. I had a bit of trouble finding one to match the constant speed of this garbage.
-This track was originally named "Peanut Butter"
-My editing software has gone to crap. WMM doesn't like my videos anymore, so I can't preview what I'm editing. Not sure why that is.
Manual stuff.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzZ4A08J8iI&feature=youtu.be
Quicknotes:
-I apologize in advance for the overall monotony of the speed.
-The song I originally chose was a little slow and didn't sync as well as I had planned, and the track turned out faster than I anticipated. The song in this track isn't my favorite but fits quite nicely. I had a bit of trouble finding one to match the constant speed of this garbage.
-This track was originally named "Peanut Butter"
-My editing software has gone to crap. WMM doesn't like my videos anymore, so I can't preview what I'm editing. Not sure why that is.
Manual stuff.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzZ4A08J8iI&feature=youtu.be
Wizzy- Member
Re: Reach - Wizzy
Don't know what you're talking about, that was awesome.
It would be fatal if you'd scene this, though
It would be fatal if you'd scene this, though
Georgio_jc- Line Rider Legend
Re: Reach - Wizzy
It seemed pretty good to me. It's a little on the mainstream side, maybe, but if we didn't have tracks like this, there wouldn't be anything to call mainstream, would there?
The only thing that kind of bothered me about this track is that it didn't really showcase your ability with tailies. The only curves that were close to loops were nosies, and while they were great, I'd like to see that with tailies as well. The track almost made me believe that you avoided them because you weren't confident with your ability to make them stable, and that would really be too bad. If it really is the case, I think you'd get some real satisfaction out of practicing your tailies until you get 'em down pat for any length.
And, of course, there were some little tiny things in a few spots that I could point out (pressure stuff, consistency of well strength, etc), but that'd just be annoying because they're things that you could very easily fix with a bit of effort, but not in a way that would make your tracks more fun or satisfying to make.
Overall, I approve. Make more.
The only thing that kind of bothered me about this track is that it didn't really showcase your ability with tailies. The only curves that were close to loops were nosies, and while they were great, I'd like to see that with tailies as well. The track almost made me believe that you avoided them because you weren't confident with your ability to make them stable, and that would really be too bad. If it really is the case, I think you'd get some real satisfaction out of practicing your tailies until you get 'em down pat for any length.
And, of course, there were some little tiny things in a few spots that I could point out (pressure stuff, consistency of well strength, etc), but that'd just be annoying because they're things that you could very easily fix with a bit of effort, but not in a way that would make your tracks more fun or satisfying to make.
Overall, I approve. Make more.
Hedgehogs4Me- Line Rider Legend
Re: Reach - Wizzy
OMG, I love you for the song!! <3
Alexisonfire is best! Will you check out their farewell tour?
Track was pretty cool I like your manuals
Alexisonfire is best! Will you check out their farewell tour?
Track was pretty cool I like your manuals
Sssschiller- Member
Re: Reach - Wizzy
Wizzy 'Vibe' levels were off the charts! Loved the rolls and shiz, but I do have to point out that some of the manuals themselves weren't "up to par." Namely the tail manuals, which were wobbly in a few areas.
But overall, great job!
But overall, great job!
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Reach - Wizzy
Not really mainstream, but old-schooly manuals that are very cool once in awhile. Inspires me to do manuals
Fauxfyre- Member
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Re: Reach - Wizzy
Definitely feels like a track I would love to make. The green line continuation at the end was a little weird, and I'm not entirely sure of the point of it, but I love the track as a whole, and can't wait to see more.
Opal Rider- Moderator
- Aestetikally appealing
Re: Reach - Wizzy
I like those smooth curves and that switching between the lines was great as well. I also like the sync and flow of the track as well, overall you did a very nice job.
Stallie- Member
Re: Reach - Wizzy
I like those gravity wells and those manuals are good as well. The style of the track was pretty cool as well. I also like the flow of the lines too; overall you did an awesome job.
Re: Reach - Wizzy
Stallie?SPL4SHZ0N3 wrote: I like those gravity wells and those manuals are good as well. The style of the track was pretty cool as well. I also like the flow of the lines too; overall you did an awesome job.
Re: Reach - Wizzy
SPL4SHZ0N3 wrote: I like those gravity wells and those manuals are good as well. The style of the track was pretty cool as well. I also like the flow of the lines too; overall you did an awesome job.
Well I thought that those manuals and those granuals are great as well. The flow of the track was great as well. I also like the flips too; overall you did a good job.
Chuggers- Member
- villainous quirker
Re: Reach - Wizzy
STALL13Z0N3 wrote: I like those gravity wells and those manuals are good as well. The style of the track was pretty cool as well. I also like the flow of the lines too; overall you did an awesome job.
The gravity manual swells were great as well as the manuals and gravity wells were great as well. The style and was good as well as the flow as well. The lines seemed to flow well as well; overall the job that was done was great as well as awesome as well.
shammies- Member
- I'm the auts guy around here!
Re: Reach - Wizzy
So many kind words <3
Thank you guys.
.. Personally I don't like it that much too many mistakes.
Thank you guys.
.. Personally I don't like it that much too many mistakes.
Wizzy- Member
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