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Post by Helios Pavonine on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:07 pm


''Eden'' is my comeback and battle track against .boo and Lankher. It has been under construction for over 1 year, counts 3808 lines and lasts for 100 seconds. In the beginning, it was meant to be a masterpiece that described the modern world of quirk and a neat storyline to go with, but it took a different direction only a few weeks ago when I started to realize it wasn't actually a masterpiece and the storyline was too dramatic.

Contains tricks I've never done before like a 2nd peg alt. fling under a nose fling, inv. shoulder / butt ASDC, hand / shoulder ASDF, HBH alt. fling and much more.

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Post by Cereal on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:07 pm

Now THAT was modern quirk! No part of it was a disappointment. It really baffles me how you managed to make that XY section fit so well!

No focus on music syncing, just all out tricks and enjoyment. Haters gonna hate inevitably, but I just want you to do whatever you feel like you wanna do. Don't worry about what the natural is doing.... just do yo thang. Whatever's good to you, then you do it.

That is all.


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Re: Eden

Post by Inukaza on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:10 pm

Awesome.

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Re: Eden

Post by Chuggers on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:11 pm

looks like everyone's predictions were right

its valance on crack

eden best ever


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Re: Eden

Post by SETH on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:12 pm

wow! I enjoy each flings of your track, congrat!

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Re: Eden

Post by roflmaoqwerty on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:18 pm

HOLY DANG BRO

Incredible track. Solid, powerful quirk, with an XY to match. Technically amazing and equally entertaining (in my eyes).

You're right, it wasn't a masterpiece... because you've got so much more in store. You have incredible skill and potential, and this was your first great opus of many.

If this is the world of modern quirk, I'm stoked to be a part of it. Well done. Thumbs Up

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Post by pure5152 on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:18 pm

this might just be my favorite high-speed quirk of all time
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Post by Wolf_Spirit on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:20 pm

Holy jeebus.
That's amazing<3

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Post by Sonoftheluster on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:33 pm

Its okay...needs more swag :|

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Re: Eden

Post by OTDE on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:38 pm

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was the noise I made when I saw the thread.
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Re: Eden

Post by Orthuss on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:39 pm

OH YES YOU USED WOODKID

YES

That, dude, was awesome.

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Re: Eden

Post by LineMagiX on Thu Oct 18, 2012 8:41 pm

omg that intro was so pimp. very impressive hp!

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Post by Rafael on Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:45 pm

Okay. That was beast. Definitely better than I expected. Not technically, but stylistically you really surprised me. Awesome job Helios!
Also, this editing reminds me of Sonic Motion 8D
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Re: Eden

Post by efrazable on Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:48 pm

inb4 LCC

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Re: Eden

Post by Fauxfyre on Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:53 pm

EPIC TRACK CHECKLIST
High speed, check
Great to watch, check
Impressive, check
Requires a rewatch to make sure I saw everything, check
Tricks that I have no idea exactly what they are, check
Epic music, check
Consistency, check
Made it onto my Awesome Tracks playlist, no check...

Sorry can only give you 9.9/10
This wait was not in vain! You seem to have a near mastery of fling quirk, great job!

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Re: Eden

Post by CamQuartr on Thu Oct 18, 2012 9:58 pm

Skillfully, that track was very impressive

though I felt like it lacked the most important aspect of LineRider: Fun

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Post by Opal Rider on Thu Oct 18, 2012 10:06 pm

Definitely cool. And while I've never been the biggest supporter of modern quirk, I can easily back this track up. Beautifully made, and the only thing that seemed out of place was that large fakie fall. It seemed to fall under the category of 'place all the airtime in one section of the track syndrome'.

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Post by Votale on Thu Oct 18, 2012 11:06 pm

@CamQuartr wrote:Skillfully, that track was very impressive

though I felt like it lacked the most important aspect of LineRider: Fun

All of my yes to this comment. It just didn't have the fun-to-watch feeling of a Leo/Anomaly/Georgio track. It was damn impressive, but to me that's not the only important factor.

As some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism (Inb4everyoneexplodesonmebecausewecan'ttakethiskindofthinghere), it lacked manuals and speed variation, a lot. There was like 1 manual that lasted for more than .001 second, so I was like "nyaahhh sad face</3". And it was basically the same speed the entire time aside from the end and a little in the XY. And the end was my favorite part honestly xD I'm just that guy that isn't impressed by ASDFs because I don't find them hard myself, but don't let that take away from the track. I appreciate other things more I guess. Also, some of the airtime made me like "ew gross" because it felt out of place or awkward, but that's cool beans.

HOWEVER, it was freaking cool. Like I was expecting this kind of style because I know you dig it and it's like that teddy bear you love the most, but I wasn't expecting it to be even near this level. I was pretty shocked, gotta admit. Just make sure you don't pull an Aspi and try so hard you're like "Well I never want to do that again I quit." Have fun, because fun is fun to watch. I enjoy making funky stuff and fun stuff cause I'm like "teehee that tickles my fancy." Anyways, great stuff, you impressed me Smile
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Re: Eden

Post by Wizzy on Fri Oct 19, 2012 12:00 am

@Votale wrote:
@CamQuartr wrote:Skillfully, that track was very impressive

though I felt like it lacked the most important aspect of LineRider: Fun

All of my yes to this comment. It just didn't have the fun-to-watch feeling of a Leo/Anomaly/Georgio track. It was damn impressive, but to me that's not the only important factor.

100% disagree.

@ the track: Holy balls. That is all.

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Post by [senpai] kevans on Fri Oct 19, 2012 12:26 am

@CamQuartr wrote:Skillfully, that track was very impressive

though I felt like it lacked the most important aspect of LineRider: Fun

I agree.

Helios didn't agree that having fun, and not focusing mainly on skill, could result in good tracks. Now that I watch this again, I'd have to say this track is now a 8.5 out of 10. It felt a little forced, like you kept saying to yourself the entire time "DIS WILL BE THE BEST TRACK IN ALL DEH LANDS, JUST THEY WAIT, THEY"LL SEE, THEY"LL ALL SEE!"

Okay,not quite literally that, but that's what it felt like.

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Re: Eden

Post by TheRevTastic on Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:06 am

How did you get vimeo to let you upload a game video :|

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Post by Lankher on Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:20 am

Hm, better than I expected.

Still not good enough

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Post by Hedgehogs4Me on Fri Oct 19, 2012 1:59 am

As a trick stacker, that was hilarious. My only real complaint is that it possibly could've benefited from some recycling.

Also, if it had different music, 90% of the "that track wasn't fun" comments would go away.

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Post by Wizzy on Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:48 am

I actually think that's true ^

I couldn't take the music seriously at first but if you would have used something more lulzy like Cereal did I would have enjoyed it a bit more but it was still tons of fun to watch. It was obvious you were trying hard and put in a lot of effort but you managed to do it in a way that was stylistic and very entertaining. The XY rocked and even aesthetically looked computerized and glitchy in a way which I thought was neat.

Feature this for sure.

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