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Connor's Comeback

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Post by Connor Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:23 pm

My first track after returning to Line Rider and the forums.
Sorry about the choppiness. I can't record very well unless I record it slowed down and speed it up, but I was lazy today.

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Post by Stallie Sun Apr 29, 2012 2:42 pm

Try making tail, hand and head manuals instead of nose manuals through the whole track, and try making your curves more smooth. You should also try making some flings in your tracks. Overall it was a not bad track, just keep improving on your skills by practicing them. Smile
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Post by Kohuda Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:11 pm

As usual, don't listen to Stallie, he has really no idea what he's talking about.

I really enjoyed the track, music seemed a bit loud though.
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Post by Cereal Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:13 pm

Hm... not a single tail/head manual, but nose manuals are prty chl. I think that the track's greatest strength was it's variety in direction.

I can tell that you're definitely a manualer, so I'd recommend practicing with other types of manuals, as well as striving towards even pressure. Wink

Ultimately, I'm glad you see you're making babies again!
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Post by Stallie Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:15 pm

Kohuded wrote:As usual, don't listen to Stallie, he has really no idea what he's talking about.

I really enjoyed the track, music seemed a bit loud though.

Unlike you I said things that he could improve on and should do, you did a horrible job with that. :|
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Post by Sssschiller Sun Apr 29, 2012 6:50 pm

Stallie wrote:
Kohuded wrote:As usual, don't listen to Stallie, he has really no idea what he's talking about.

I really enjoyed the track, music seemed a bit loud though.

Unlike you I said things that he could improve on and should do, you did a horrible job with that. :|

Touché 8D

I liked the manuals Smile make more tracks and I think you are going to do some badass ones Wink
Try to zooom in next time!
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Post by redcap Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:24 pm

I liked the manuals too! Try to have music that fits your track a little better.

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Post by OTDE Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:43 pm

Stallie wrote:Try making tail, hand and head manuals
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Post by Chuggers Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:44 pm

OTDE wrote:
Stallie wrote:Try making tail, hand and head manuals
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Post by Connor Mon Apr 30, 2012 5:58 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys. I'll take all these things into consideration when I am making my next track.
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