Connor's Comeback
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Cereal
Kohuda
Stallie
Connor
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Connor's Comeback
My first track after returning to Line Rider and the forums.
Sorry about the choppiness. I can't record very well unless I record it slowed down and speed it up, but I was lazy today.
Sorry about the choppiness. I can't record very well unless I record it slowed down and speed it up, but I was lazy today.
Re: Connor's Comeback
Try making tail, hand and head manuals instead of nose manuals through the whole track, and try making your curves more smooth. You should also try making some flings in your tracks. Overall it was a not bad track, just keep improving on your skills by practicing them.
Stallie- Member
Re: Connor's Comeback
As usual, don't listen to Stallie, he has really no idea what he's talking about.
I really enjoyed the track, music seemed a bit loud though.
I really enjoyed the track, music seemed a bit loud though.
Kohuda- Member
Re: Connor's Comeback
Hm... not a single tail/head manual, but nose manuals are prty chl. I think that the track's greatest strength was it's variety in direction.
I can tell that you're definitely a manualer, so I'd recommend practicing with other types of manuals, as well as striving towards even pressure.
Ultimately, I'm glad you see you're making babies again!
I can tell that you're definitely a manualer, so I'd recommend practicing with other types of manuals, as well as striving towards even pressure.
Ultimately, I'm glad you see you're making babies again!
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Connor's Comeback
Kohuded wrote:As usual, don't listen to Stallie, he has really no idea what he's talking about.
I really enjoyed the track, music seemed a bit loud though.
Unlike you I said things that he could improve on and should do, you did a horrible job with that.
Stallie- Member
Re: Connor's Comeback
Stallie wrote:Kohuded wrote:As usual, don't listen to Stallie, he has really no idea what he's talking about.
I really enjoyed the track, music seemed a bit loud though.
Unlike you I said things that he could improve on and should do, you did a horrible job with that.
Touché
I liked the manuals make more tracks and I think you are going to do some badass ones
Try to zooom in next time!
Sssschiller- Member
Re: Connor's Comeback
I liked the manuals too! Try to have music that fits your track a little better.
redcap- Member
Re: Connor's Comeback
Stallie wrote:Try making tail, hand and head manuals
OTDE- Administrator
- the postham mindset
Re: Connor's Comeback
Radda?OTDE wrote:Stallie wrote:Try making tail, hand and head manuals
Chuggers- Member
- villainous quirker
Re: Connor's Comeback
Thanks for the feedback guys. I'll take all these things into consideration when I am making my next track.
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