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Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Fauxfyre on Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:01 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nFiie2rCzKU
Please read the video description

EDIT: Due to this Youtube video being blocked in 223 countries, you can download the .wmv video file here if you are having troubles. (~50mb)


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Post by Opal Rider on Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:16 pm

You. Look at your video. Now look back at me. Back to your video, now back to me.i am now thoroughly convinced that you're SCG trying to troll us. You've been found out. Very Happy

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Post by Pinter on Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:37 pm

can't watch it D:

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Post by Fauxfyre on Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:44 pm

@Pinter wrote:can't watch it D:
What the..? It says it's blocked in 223 countries :|
Do you want me to PM you the wmv file?

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Post by Fauxfyre on Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:17 pm

Kramwood wrote:
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@Pinter wrote:can't watch it D:
What the..? It says it's blocked in 223 countries :|
Do you want me to PM you the wmv file?

just edit your first post and put it there that way people with the same problem won't bug you later Very Happy

Way ahead of you. I just have to get the video onto mediafire and I'm set

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Post by Ph0enix on Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:48 pm

@Opal Rider wrote:You. Look at your video. Now look back at me. Back to your video, now back to me.i am now thoroughly convinced that you're SCG trying to troll us. You've been found out. Very Happy
You could be right^.

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Post by Ph0enix on Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:48 pm

EDIT: somehow it tried to post what I said twice.

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Inukaza on Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:55 pm

This is my opinion and advice: Collab with someone with a higher skill level than you, and you'll reflect that. You are literally on the edge of breaking through to a whole new level, you just got to be invoked by being pitted with someone who's challenging you.

If you collabed with SCG, you'd do a track with less of those unbalanced manuals, and work on your flings, copying how he makes them, improving. Same with manuals if you collabed with cereal.


You learn by collabing, and you're right on the dot to being someone who makes decent track. xD

Nice job.

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Post by Stallie on Mon Apr 23, 2012 3:58 pm

If anything I would say your granuals are pretty good. The thing you need to work on a little bit are those curves, keep making them more smoother and less rough. Your flings are decent as well, but they could use some work as well. So keep on practicing those flings and getting your wells a bit more stronger. Over all I thought you did a really nice job, keep it up. Wink
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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by SETH on Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:03 pm

i can't see your video bro ... emi rights...

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Post by Fauxfyre on Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:07 pm

@SETH wrote:i can't see your video bro ... emi rights...

I posted a mediafire link with the video at the top of the page. I'm going to stop using copyrighted music

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Post by Cereal on Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:26 pm

Rainbow Dash wrote:You learn by collabing

Really? I kinda learned myself (and through tutorials) xD

This reminds me of some old school tracks from riders who ended up being some of the best around. I'd recommend expanding your variety of tracks. For example, XY, compact quirk, manuals, etc.

Most importantly, just have fun with it. Sometimes messing around a bit will get you the best results.

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Post by redcap on Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:58 pm

Youtube Copypasta: Work on them manuals some more, but good job mate. Smile

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Post by SETH on Mon Apr 23, 2012 7:38 pm

really great track, nice job

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by rich on Mon Apr 23, 2012 7:56 pm

Spoiler:
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Post by theacp127 on Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:05 pm

I'm working on my 4th track right now and it's not nearly as good as this one. Thumbs Up

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Post by Pinter on Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:44 pm

Like it Smile

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