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Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Shotoku on Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:01 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nFiie2rCzKU
Please read the video description

EDIT: Due to this Youtube video being blocked in 223 countries, you can download the .wmv video file here if you are having troubles. (~50mb)


Last edited by shotoku on Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:26 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Opal Rider on Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:16 am

You. Look at your video. Now look back at me. Back to your video, now back to me.i am now thoroughly convinced that you're SCG trying to troll us. You've been found out. Very Happy

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Kramwood on Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:32 pm

Opal Rider wrote:You. Look at your video. Now look back at me. Back to your video, now back to me.i am now thoroughly convinced that you're SCG trying to troll us. You've been found out. Very Happy


lolwut that's what people used to say about me xD.

Anyway nice job! you're improving really fast! Work on controling your flings a little bit more and your manuals could use a little bit more balance. keep up the good work Thumbs Up

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Pinter on Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:37 pm

can't watch it D:

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Shotoku on Mon Apr 23, 2012 12:44 pm

Pinter wrote:can't watch it D:

What the..? It says it's blocked in 223 countries :|
Do you want me to PM you the wmv file?

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Thunderbird, a typical, mostly gravity well quirk track
Gaea's Cradle, a short mid to high speed manual track
Electron Cloud, a fling quirk collab with Roflmaoqwerty
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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Kramwood on Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:15 pm

shotoku wrote:
Pinter wrote:can't watch it D:

What the..? It says it's blocked in 223 countries :|
Do you want me to PM you the wmv file?


just edit your first post and put it there that way people with the same problem won't bug you later Very Happy

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Shotoku on Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:17 pm

Kramwood wrote:
shotoku wrote:
Pinter wrote:can't watch it D:

What the..? It says it's blocked in 223 countries :|
Do you want me to PM you the wmv file?


just edit your first post and put it there that way people with the same problem won't bug you later Very Happy


Way ahead of you. I just have to get the video onto mediafire and I'm set

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Electron Cloud, a fling quirk collab with Roflmaoqwerty
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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Ph0enix on Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:48 pm

Opal Rider wrote:You. Look at your video. Now look back at me. Back to your video, now back to me.i am now thoroughly convinced that you're SCG trying to troll us. You've been found out. Very Happy

You could be right^.

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Ph0enix on Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:48 pm

EDIT: somehow it tried to post what I said twice.

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Rainbow Dash on Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:55 pm

This is my opinion and advice: Collab with someone with a higher skill level than you, and you'll reflect that. You are literally on the edge of breaking through to a whole new level, you just got to be invoked by being pitted with someone who's challenging you.

If you collabed with SCG, you'd do a track with less of those unbalanced manuals, and work on your flings, copying how he makes them, improving. Same with manuals if you collabed with cereal.


You learn by collabing, and you're right on the dot to being someone who makes decent track. xD

Nice job.

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Stallie on Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:58 pm

If anything I would say your granuals are pretty good. The thing you need to work on a little bit are those curves, keep making them more smoother and less rough. Your flings are decent as well, but they could use some work as well. So keep on practicing those flings and getting your wells a bit more stronger. Over all I thought you did a really nice job, keep it up. Wink

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by SETH on Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:03 pm

i can't see your video bro ... emi rights...

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Shotoku on Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:07 pm

SETH wrote:i can't see your video bro ... emi rights...


I posted a mediafire link with the video at the top of the page. I'm going to stop using copyrighted music

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Cereal on Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:26 pm

Rainbow Dash wrote:You learn by collabing


Really? I kinda learned myself (and through tutorials) xD

This reminds me of some old school tracks from riders who ended up being some of the best around. I'd recommend expanding your variety of tracks. For example, XY, compact quirk, manuals, etc.

Most importantly, just have fun with it. Sometimes messing around a bit will get you the best results.

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by redcap on Mon Apr 23, 2012 4:58 pm

Youtube Copypasta: Work on them manuals some more, but good job mate. Smile

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by SETH on Mon Apr 23, 2012 6:38 pm

really great track, nice job

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by rich on Mon Apr 23, 2012 6:56 pm

Spoiler:

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by theacp127 on Mon Apr 23, 2012 8:05 pm

I'm working on my 4th track right now and it's not nearly as good as this one. Thumbs Up

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Re: Shotoku - Unnoticed

Post by Pinter on Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:44 am

Like it Smile

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