Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist
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theacp127
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Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yEhJEv5aKIM
EDIT: embeded video
EDIT: embeded video
Last edited by shotoku64 on Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:37 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : embeded the video into the post)
Fauxfyre- Member
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You know you can embed videos here, right? Click the icon that looks like a film strip.
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cool track, nice flings, You should only work on the smootness of your curves
Pinter- Member
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When I watch nub tracks, I think of things to say for them to get better.
When I watch this track, I did not think of anything that i could say for you to get better.
It was that good.
When I watch this track, I did not think of anything that i could say for you to get better.
It was that good.
Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist
Umm yeah, came here for the pleasure of watching your second line rider track(am i right?). But let me get some new pants. That left me speechless. The amount of skill that you jumped is just breath taking. I can't wait for your next track when you're better than hedge. Some things you could work on:
But other than that, you're a boss. A BOSS!
- Stronger flings
- Stronger manuals
- maybe all blue?
- smoother curves. (im not one to talk about that.)
But other than that, you're a boss. A BOSS!
rich- Member
Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist
Thanks guys! The feedback I got after the first track really helped with this one.
I'm not that much of a fan of doing all-blue though. Maybe once I get better at all-blue manuals, alt-flings, etc I'll try one
I'm not that much of a fan of doing all-blue though. Maybe once I get better at all-blue manuals, alt-flings, etc I'll try one
Fauxfyre- Member
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Couldn't hav said it better my self.efrazable wrote:When I watch nub tracks, I think of things to say for them to get better.
When I watch this track, I did not think of anything that i could say for you to get better.
It was that good.
Ph0enix- Member
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Nice track! I got an oldschool feeling because of the Muse music
Sssschiller- Member
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Second track, WTF!!!
Dude, if you're excelling that much you will be graet at line rider.
Dude, if you're excelling that much you will be graet at line rider.
weebit- Member
Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist
You're definitely a fast learner! Even though the flings are a bit weak, they are flings nonetheless. (Seriously, I went through a 2 year phase where my flings were poop)
I think that you would enjoy slow/mid-paced manuals a bit more. Once you master even pressuring, you can branch out to all of the high speed manual shiz if that's what you really enjoy.
Oh, and dat butt manual @ 1:34
I think that you would enjoy slow/mid-paced manuals a bit more. Once you master even pressuring, you can branch out to all of the high speed manual shiz if that's what you really enjoy.
Oh, and dat butt manual @ 1:34
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist
I started linerider about two or so months ago, and you've learned way faster than I have. I still have tons of trouble getting a basic fling. Great track.
theacp127- Member
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Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist
Can't say how much I miss the times when it was a common suggestion to master manuals before moving on to quirk.
Your quirk was better than your manuals, and it felt very old-school. Work on the smoothness of your curves and try to keep an even pressure throughout your manuals. In Line Rider, bright, your future is. Hope to see more from you soon.
Your quirk was better than your manuals, and it felt very old-school. Work on the smoothness of your curves and try to keep an even pressure throughout your manuals. In Line Rider, bright, your future is. Hope to see more from you soon.
Jam- Member
Re: Shotoku64 - Bolt Fist
Great job! Very fun to watch and all that stuff. The only thing that I could possibly see that you could improve on would be to get more powerful flings, and maybe more variety in the quirks.
8/10
8/10
katamariroller22- Member
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