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Pinter - Blexp

Post by Pinter on Wed Mar 21, 2012 2:56 pm

heya,

An all blue experimenting track, enjoy. I had fun making it, hope you have fun watching it :P

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Re: Pinter - Blexp

Post by Helios Pavonine on Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:03 pm

Music was quite... interesting.

Fun track! I liked the stall Smile

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Re: Pinter - Blexp

Post by Stallie on Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:15 pm

The sync felt like it started too early in the beginning. But over all the sync was not bad. The track was very nice itself, it reminded me a bit of the tracks georgio use to make years ago. Your curves were pretty good this time, and your wells on the other hand could be a bit more stronger. So try working on those few things as well, over all you did a very good.
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Re: Pinter - Blexp

Post by WishLine on Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:56 pm

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Section 2 – Track Progression (6 Points out of a possible 10)
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Track had quite smooth curves = +1 –OR– Track had very smooth curves = +2
Track moved left as well as right = +1
Track moved up as well as down = +1
This track had some sort of basic flip or loop-the-loop = +1

Track had a good pace = +1 –OR– Track had an extremely fast pace = +2
Track flowed nicely = +1 –OR– Track flowed extremely well = +3
Section 3 – Manuals (6 Points out of a possible 15)
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This track had flings = +2
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Section 6 – Scenery (X Points out of a possible 25)
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Naked = 49/75
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Re: Pinter - Blexp

Post by chaomocha on Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:37 pm

She put a bag on my head.







STILL COUNTS!

nice track btw, nicely done. Keep it up!!

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Re: Pinter - Blexp

Post by Opal Rider on Wed Mar 21, 2012 9:50 pm

xD The lonely Island.

The track was sex, if not a bit rough. I liked some of your flanuals, some of your flings, and some of your manuals. Unfortunately, they were a tad inconsistant. Other than that, I'm not sure how to help you on it.

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Re: Pinter - Blexp

Post by rich on Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:10 pm

Opal Rider wrote:xD The lonely Island.

The track was sex, if not a bit rough. I liked some of your flanuals, some of your flings, and some of your manuals. Unfortunately, they were a tad inconsistant. Other than that, I'm not sure how to help you on it.
Opal Rider wrote:The track was sex, if not a bit rough
Opal Rider wrote:track was sex, if not a bit
Opal Rider wrote:was sex, if not
Opal Rider wrote:was sex
Opal Rider wrote:sex
I agree.
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Re: Pinter - Blexp

Post by Pinter on Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:44 am

Opal Rider wrote:xD The lonely Island.

The track was sex, if not a bit rough. I liked some of your flanuals, some of your flings, and some of your manuals. Unfortunately, they were a tad inconsistant. Other than that, I'm not sure how to help you on it.

Opal Rider wrote:xD The lonely Island.

Yes xd It's The Lonely Island, But I knew that after I released the track :P

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