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The Other Side - Ryder and Pinter

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Post by Pinter Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:18 pm

Heya

Collab between me and ryder, enjoy!

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Post by chaomocha Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:20 pm

WMG hates your faces Sad
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Post by Pinter Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:31 pm

goddamnit D:

Blocked in some countries Sad

EDIT; blocked in the US
EDIT 2; Upload without/with other music ? Or is there another thing I can do ?
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Post by RyderLR Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:44 pm

send it to me and I can upload it.
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Post by Helios Pavonine Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:31 pm

That was better than I'd expected! Somehow some parts reminded me a lot of Georgio.

First off, the integration was outstanding. Loved it!

Secondly, the manuals could use some improvement, for both of you. Try to be precise and make them as smooth and balanced as you can.

Thirdly, Pinter's last part was fun! You should improve more on quirk, because I believe you got potential! That also applies to Ryder. Your grolling was coolos beanos.

Overall a fun track. Good job you two Very Happy
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Post by RyderLR Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:33 pm

;_; I wish I could watch it, haven't seen it in a long time xD

Thanks for the advice and tips though Very Happy
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Post by Opal Rider Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:30 pm

I wish I could watch it, too. Stern but Fair
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Post by weebit Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:36 pm

Opal Rider wrote:I wish I could watch it, too. Stern but Fair

yup
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Post by RyderLR Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:32 pm

I told him to send it to me but he sent me the .sol, and I'm not about to record and edit when he already did D:
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Post by Cereal Sun Mar 18, 2012 7:10 pm

Um... reupload with non-copyrighted music or audioswap.

Chop chop, let's gooo.
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Post by Pinter Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:11 am

damn, I thought ryder meant the sol xd but I'm now at school, as soon as I go home I reupload it
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Post by WishLine Mon Mar 19, 2012 2:26 pm

WishLine track rating system
Section 1 – Track Creation (3 Points out of a possible 5)
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Section 2 – Track Progression (7 Points out of a possible 10)
Spoiler:
Section 3 – Manuals (9 Points out of a possible 15)
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Section 4 – Quirks (12 Points out of a possible 20)
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Section 5 – Track Beginning and Ending (5 Points out of a possible 5)
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Section 6 – Scenery (X Points out of a possible 25)
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Section 7 – Track entertainment value and comments (10 Points out of a possible 20)
Spoiler:
Scoring
Scened = A/A/100
Naked = 46/75
Final Score = 61%
Score-aid
Spoiler:

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Post by RyderLR Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:40 pm

Not bashing the whole idea, I mean it's great that you are reviewing tracks but this is VERY flawed imo. I will point out the problems.....

WishLine wrote:WishLine track rating system
Section 1 – Track Creation (3 Points out of a possible 5)

Section 2 – Track Progression (7 Points out of a possible 10)
Spoiler:

Why does it matter if the track was extremely fast pace? there are hundreds of tracks that are amazing at a slow smooth pace, maybe I am misunderstanding this concept, but this doesn't seem right.

Section 3 – Manuals (9 Points out of a possible 15)
Spoiler:

So for a manual track to be good it has to have head manuals? and a manual loop? and why does a track that has manuals in it have to be primarily a manual track for it to receive more points? Also, why do the manuals have to be high speed?

Section 4 – Quirks (12 Points out of a possible 20)
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loops? spirals? lengthy chains? special manual? primarily a quirk track? again, manu-quirk

Section 5 – Track Beginning and Ending (5 Points out of a possible 5)
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beginning and ending? don't all tracks have those, you should put "stall". ended at good speed? what does this mean. recognized stall? what if someone created a new stall, I am confused.

Section 6 – Scenery (X Points out of a possible 25)
Spoiler:


Tracks do not need to be realistic, just no floating objects,I like the "unattractive" white space part, not all tracks need a monument, and I like the rest of this section.

Section 7 – Track entertainment value and comments (10 Points out of a possible 20)
Spoiler:

This is good and expressing criticism here would be good, comments are always welcomed on any track.

Scoring
Scened = A/A/100
Naked = 46/75
Final Score = 61%
Score-aid
Spoiler:

I learned that grading scales such as this one are unnecessary, too many possible options. Makes people angry if they get too low oof a score and people start bawwwing, plus line rider tracks should not be graded, this is not school, this is where we come to have fun, which is what line rider is at its core. No matter what anyone thinks. They are for amusement, not to be judged, but constructive criticism is good.


Don't worry I love the concept, but needs tweaking and chaning. I used to use something (somewhat) similar to this, I realized it was no the right thing to do. Sorry but I don't approve of this, but hey it's jsut my opinion if you like doing it, by all means keep doing it! Thumbs Up
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Post by Pinter Tue Mar 20, 2012 10:45 am

Ohkey I uploaded another version!

EDIT: btw wishline, I like it how you reviewed this track, but if it was a quirk track, you won't score any points on manuals.. ?
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Post by WishLine Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:19 pm

ryderofthelines wrote:Not bashing the whole idea, I mean it's great that you are reviewing tracks but this is VERY flawed imo. I will point out the problems.....

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Don't worry I love the concept, but needs tweaking and chaning. I used to use something (somewhat) similar to this, I realized it was no the right thing to do. Sorry but I don't approve of this, but hey it's jsut my opinion if you like doing it, by all means keep doing it! Thumbs Up

Big thanks for the feedback. What I'm trying to do at the mo is rate a variety of tracks and see how the system works out, whether it gives accurate scores. I'm not in the least offended by your points. I suppose some of the scoring is at odds with itself, but nobody is meant to get full marks.

In particular, I'm concerned myself by the 'primarily a manual' 'primarily a quirk' points awards...I'll have to look at them :/

Also, as for the 'realistic' point in the scenery, that's why there's an 'or' there. If scenery is 'abstract and entertaining', it can score points in that way!

It's work in progress. After I've reviewed about twenty tracks of varying abilities I'll have a reshuffle!

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Post by StingReay Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:11 pm

Video not blocked in Canada. 8D

Anyway, I quite enjoyed that! Great job.
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Post by Stallie Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:54 pm

Pinter your parts were pretty good over all, but some of your curves were a little rough. Try to improve on your curves a little more. Over all your parts were nice. Ryder your parts were really good, your curves were smooth and your wells were not bad at all. Over all you did a nice job as well. All together you guys did a very nice job. Wink
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Post by rabid squirrel Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:44 pm

WishLine wrote:
ryderofthelines wrote:Not bashing the whole idea, I mean it's great that you are reviewing tracks but this is VERY flawed imo. I will point out the problems.....

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Don't worry I love the concept, but needs tweaking and chaning. I used to use something (somewhat) similar to this, I realized it was no the right thing to do. Sorry but I don't approve of this, but hey it's jsut my opinion if you like doing it, by all means keep doing it! Thumbs Up

Big thanks for the feedback. What I'm trying to do at the mo is rate a variety of tracks and see how the system works out, whether it gives accurate scores. I'm not in the least offended by your points. I suppose some of the scoring is at odds with itself, but nobody is meant to get full marks.

In particular, I'm concerned myself by the 'primarily a manual' 'primarily a quirk' points awards...I'll have to look at them :/

Also, as for the 'realistic' point in the scenery, that's why there's an 'or' there. If scenery is 'abstract and entertaining', it can score points in that way!

It's work in progress. After I've reviewed about twenty tracks of varying abilities I'll have a reshuffle!
Or you could grade tracks based on

1. How entertaining was it

2. How impressed were you

3. How much did it inspire you

4. How influential do you think it will be

5. What would you have done differently
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Post by chaomocha Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:42 pm

rabid squirrel wrote:
1. How entertaining was it
very
2. How impressed were you
very
3. How much did it inspire you
enough to keep working on my track Very Happy
4. How influential do you think it will be
eh not much, but I'm a man of simple taste and enjoy watching everything
5. What would you have done differently
not a whole lot, your style is yours and you did it perfectly
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