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Post by BoltKey on Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:00 am

My new track, hope you like it. Watch in hd.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EZ4Lo8vmZz0&context=C439d049ADvjVQa1PpcFOQlJVnhxfPHcUOZb4JvjuS-L4jIxRV7ts=
Tell me what do you think of smoothness of manuals, flow and fling chains. Also, does anyone here recognise the music?

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Re: BoltKey - Shortlined

Post by BoltKey on Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:33 am

What are floaties? (sry stupid question)

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Re: BoltKey - Shortlined

Post by Pinter on Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:45 am

No idea what floaties are, but you did a good thing here, you're improving! keep working on the flow and on your manuals ;D , And nice kramual

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Re: BoltKey - Shortlined

Post by rich on Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:59 am

floaties = small gwell it was what they use to call the before anomally. really liked it, reminded me of old stuff.
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Re: BoltKey - Shortlined

Post by rich on Wed Mar 21, 2012 2:36 pm

Kramwood wrote:
rich wrote:floaties = small gwell it was what they use to call the before anomally. really liked it, reminded me of old stuff.

not really. it's two agw on a manual that cause him to float over nothing during the manual. you used it @ 1:04 in your track Very Happy
I thought that was an AGW just on a manual.
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Re: BoltKey - Shortlined

Post by WishLine on Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:28 pm

WishLine track rating system
Section 1 – Track Creation (3 Points out of a possible 5)
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Track had suitable titles and credits = +1
Track had fitting music = +1

Track had a special feature (all blue, all red, a plot, special editing, music syncing, super-long) = +2
Track was >1 minute in length = +1
Section 2 – Track Progression (4 Points out of a possible 10)
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Track had quite smooth curves = +1 –OR– Track had very smooth curves = +2
Track moved left as well as right = +1
Track moved up as well as down = +1
This track had some sort of basic flip or loop-the-loop = +1

Track had a good pace = +1 –OR– Track had an extremely fast pace = +2
Track flowed nicely = +1 –OR– Track flowed extremely well = +3
Section 3 – Manuals (11 Points out of a possible 15)
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Track had nose manuals = +1
Track had tail manuals = +2

Track had head manuals = +2
The track executed a manual loop = +3
Track was >50% manuals = +3 –OR– This track was primarily a manual track = +5
Some of these manuals could be regarded as ‘high-speed’ = +2
Section 4 – Quirks (10 Points out of a possible 20)
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This track had gravity wells = +2
Some of these wells were in lengthy chains = +2
Some of these made a loop or spiral = +3

This track had flings = +2
These flings were varied, long and impressive = +3
This track had a special manual (granual, flanual, Kramual etc) = +3
This track was primarily a quirk track = +5
Section 5 – Track Beginning and Ending (5 Points out of a possible 5)
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Track started at a good speed = +1
Track ended with a good or funny crash = +1 –OR– Track ended with a good standstill = +2
–OR– Track ended with a recognised stall = +4
Section 6 – Scenery (X Points out of a possible 25)
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Track attempted some scenery = +1 –OR– Entire track was scened = +3
Scenery was consistent and realistic = +3 –OR– Scenery was abstract and entertaining +3
Scenery used good shading = +2
Scenery did not leave unattractive white space = +2
Scenery had a good monument = +3 –OR– Scenery had several good or one exceptional moment = +5
Scenery had impressive detail = +5 –OR– Scenery had stunning detail = +10

Section 7 – Track entertainment value and comments (8 Points out of a possible 20)
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A basic score out of twenty to illustrate the author’s personal enjoyment of this track = 8
Comments: A decent score on track entertainment because it's a pleasure to watch you improve. It's never easy to start from novice and learn your way up to executing some of the stuff you're doing here. I'm impressed with how you've come on. A nice track. But rather left-to-right, so try and work on smoother and faster and less jerky manuals, including going right to left more.
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Scened = x/100
Naked = 40/75
Final Score = 53%
Score-aid
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Below 20% = Newbie
20-29% = Emerging
30-39% = Average
40-49% = Decent
50-59% = Good
60-69% = Great
70=79% = Excellent
80-89% = Supreme
Over 90% = Epic


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Re: BoltKey - Shortlined

Post by BoltKey on Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:13 pm

@wishline section 4: there was a kramual. Just saying.

Edit: Oh, and also section 3 it had a head manual on 1:01

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Re: BoltKey - Shortlined

Post by rabid squirrel on Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:24 pm

@rich/kram - floaties/floats, coined in omniverse (original), kram's definition

not bad at all!

my advice would be to work on making the whole deal a little more fast-paced so it's more entertaining to watch. most of the track felt a little low-energy and never really got any speed after the start.

and record more zoomed in Wink (use hypercam or one of wrtl's recording shops to avoid watermarks)

wish - I don't think that system is a good way to evaluate tracks at all. Tracks are good if they are ingenious, impressive, creative, enjoyable, entertaining, etc - things like "do you have a chain of gravity wells in your quirk" are just dumb (how would strange quark do with your system? probably pretty darn terrible)


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Re: BoltKey - Shortlined

Post by WishLine on Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:25 pm

BoltKey wrote:@wishline section 4: there was a kramual. Just saying.

Edit: Oh, and also section 3 it had a head manual on 1:01

Heehee, I knew that was a side-effect of having a quantifiable system. People would appeal me :P. Very well...*updates score*

rabid wrote:wish - I don't think that system is a good way to evaluate tracks at all. Tracks are good if they are ingenious, impressive, creative, enjoyable, entertaining, etc - things like "do you have a chain of gravity wells in your quirk" are just dumb (how would strange quark do with your system? probably pretty darn terrible)

I realise it's weird. Essentially what I'm doing is trying to calculate tracks based on technical flair to an extent, but also allotting up to 20 points for creativity, entertainment etc and a fair few for 'impressive'. I'm working on making the system better in the future. Because for example, your Bolted to the Wall should have got in the 90s because of how much I liked it but it only got 85%, which is madness. Otherwise, I'm quite pleased with how it's working out. Also, please link me 'strange quark' and I'll tell you :P)

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Re: BoltKey - Shortlined

Post by Stallie on Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:34 pm

I see you made your first kramual, nice. Anyways that track was pretty neat, but there are still somethings you could improve on. Like your wells could be stronger and your curves could be smoother as well. Other than that you did a good job, keep it up. Wink
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