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Just my first xy - BoltKey

Post by BoltKey on Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:27 pm

This is my second track here, first xy and first gravity mills ever. Just tell me what do you think. youtube.com/watch?v=Q7m7CdMSD78
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Re: Just my first xy - BoltKey

Post by WishLine on Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:38 pm

You know, for a second track and a first Xy that was a really valiant attempt. The rider interacts with your gravity wells well, and there are lots of different directions. Suffice to say I'm inpressed, but to improve you need more specialist advice than I can give!

Really well done! :-)

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Re: Just my first xy - BoltKey

Post by BoltKey on Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:42 pm

Thanks WL 8D

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Post by Chuggers on Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:42 pm

Awesome well at 0:25

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Re: Just my first xy - BoltKey

Post by Stallie on Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:07 pm

It was not bad, pretty cool, those were some nice recycles. On the other hand, you should try strengthening your wells when making XY.
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Re: Just my first xy - BoltKey

Post by Opal Rider on Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:09 pm

Oh, hello. Very Happy That was actually very entertaining. Right now my best advice would be to take more time on your tracks. That track would have been so much more fun to watch if it was full length. Keep at it.

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Re: Just my first xy - BoltKey

Post by Cereal on Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:59 pm

Pause carefully @ 0:26 o___O

Some of the tricks were great, but work on improving the flow. Wink


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Re: Just my first xy - BoltKey

Post by BoltKey on Fri Feb 24, 2012 8:09 pm

CG: lol, I have no idea how have I done that. I didnt even notice it before Smile .

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