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Just my first xy - BoltKey

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Post by BoltKey Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:27 pm

This is my second track here, first xy and first gravity mills ever. Just tell me what do you think. youtube.com/watch?v=Q7m7CdMSD78
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Post by WishLine Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:38 pm

You know, for a second track and a first Xy that was a really valiant attempt. The rider interacts with your gravity wells well, and there are lots of different directions. Suffice to say I'm inpressed, but to improve you need more specialist advice than I can give!

Really well done! :-)

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Post by BoltKey Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:42 pm

Thanks WL 8D
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Post by Chuggers Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:42 pm

Awesome well at 0:25

For a new guy, you seem pretty good far Very Happy
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Post by Stallie Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:07 pm

It was not bad, pretty cool, those were some nice recycles. On the other hand, you should try strengthening your wells when making XY.
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Post by Opal Rider Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:09 pm

Oh, hello. Very Happy That was actually very entertaining. Right now my best advice would be to take more time on your tracks. That track would have been so much more fun to watch if it was full length. Keep at it.
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Post by Cereal Fri Feb 24, 2012 7:59 pm

Pause carefully @ 0:26 o___O

Some of the tricks were great, but work on improving the flow. Wink

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Post by BoltKey Fri Feb 24, 2012 8:09 pm

CG: lol, I have no idea how have I done that. I didnt even notice it before Smile .
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