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Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track

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Post by Pinter Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:59 pm

FINALLY! Very Happy

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Thanks to Rafael ;D

The .sol
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?9d7dvd3ld2e65au

It was fun to make this track, enjoy it and comment ;D
Btw, Can you find the tricks I've never done before ?



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Post by Cereal Sat Feb 11, 2012 8:11 pm

I have mixed feelings about this track. I'm not sure whether I like the randomness of it or not, but the variation is what led me to watch it. I could see your improvement as the track went on!

The main things to improve on would be:

-Having more even pressure on nose manuals
-If you're making an omni in the future, add one XY section of a reasonable length, rather than 3 sections that are only a few lines
-Don't add random un-evenly pressured flatsled curves. It looks kinda lazy.

Anyways, congrats on making a 3-minute track. Thumbs Up
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Post by Pinter Sun Feb 12, 2012 6:50 am

You like the track or you don't.. 8D / :|

-Look, I made this track because I wanted to make some new tricks I've never done before, and some of them were XY :P
-I'm allready working on the pressure of my nose manuals.
-I made this track because I like to make tracks, for the fun of it, not to show my skills. And I liked the flatsled curves, that's why I made them. Maybe there Are not the best, but I like them.

And another thing, I made this is 2 weeks xD
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Post by Sssschiller Sun Feb 12, 2012 6:53 am

Good job, dude! I really enjoyed watching this video! One of the most creative tracks I've seen the last months! Also you have some awesome music here, I love that song (the first one xD).
I agree with Cereal on the things you should improve Wink But I think you have some great manual talent!
I favorite this track Smile (and the good recording xD)

Edit: 2 weeks?! Shocked
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Post by Pinter Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:06 am

yup, Survive (Other track) was posted 19 January, I was done with the track on 5 february, That's 2 and a half week ?
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Post by Rafael Sun Feb 12, 2012 7:33 am

Aww I KNEW I forgot to add something about the recording <.< Oops..
The recording was 30 frames per second, and I think you exported at 25 frames per second, causing a slight lag.. It's okay though.
As for the track, you did an awesome job! So much improvement! Your tailies are awesome! It's a really creative track as well! I loved the flatsled part! Reminded me of No Title by Owly hahaha. As for the faster nosies, just do what my recent tutorial says and you'll be fine! Very Happy +rep! Aww I miss rep ;_;
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Post by SETH Sun Feb 12, 2012 9:54 am

xD i'm the first no elite and OP poster on this thread.

il like the concepte of overlenghty track, but I find it lacks some fling, and too much flatsledding part for me

so still a great track
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Post by Xanth Sun Feb 12, 2012 10:30 am

so...freaking...epic
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Post by efrazable Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:41 pm

I miss rep as well...
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Post by Stallie Sun Feb 12, 2012 8:32 pm

Dude that was long. The XY was pretty decent over all, just trying making those wells more stronger. Try to focus more on those curves and making them smoother. On the other side the flow of the track went right along with the music. I especially like the experimenting you did. That was a very nice track, good job and keep it up. Wink
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Post by Cereal Sun Feb 12, 2012 8:38 pm

efrazable wrote:I miss rep as well...

indeed^

Also, yes, I did enjoy it. xD
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Post by [senpai] kevans Mon Feb 13, 2012 1:31 pm

On very rare occasions do I feel like the creator of a track truly had fun making it an was infused with the spirit that is line rider.

Yes it was noob, yes it had flow killers, but I could tell that didn't matter, and at your skill, it was pro.

I too have mixed feelings, I mainly believed this was caused by the song. I believe that if you are going to use a song with frequently changing tempos, the track too should sync with it. Some parts of the song were upbeat, in the middle of a flow killer, and vice versa.

The manuals and flat sledding were amazingly nice, despite the "choppy-ness" of the lines (I honestly have no idea why the smoothness of a curve matters, but that's what it is), but you drew what had to be ridden.

from 2:14 - 2:17 was some of the best manual reversals I have ever seen, and was not expecting any of them (IMO, the best reversals are one you don't expect).

from 2:55 to end was the best climax I have seen. A semi fast track to a sudden gain in speed to a slow (bit of a flow killer) stall. Made me shiver. Though there could of been more frame skips in that frame skip part.

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Post by WishLine Mon Feb 13, 2012 2:40 pm

Very impressive smooth curves, nice recycling, flatsledding which looks deliberate and appropriate, all nice. A little stop-start in places, but who am I to judge?

You dedicated yourself to this track well, especially to make three mins, so well done. I enjoyed watching it Smile

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