Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
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Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
FINALLY!
RIDDLE
Thanks to Rafael ;D
The .sol
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?9d7dvd3ld2e65au
It was fun to make this track, enjoy it and comment ;D
Btw, Can you find the tricks I've never done before ?
RIDDLE
Thanks to Rafael ;D
The .sol
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?9d7dvd3ld2e65au
It was fun to make this track, enjoy it and comment ;D
Btw, Can you find the tricks I've never done before ?
Pinter- Member
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
I have mixed feelings about this track. I'm not sure whether I like the randomness of it or not, but the variation is what led me to watch it. I could see your improvement as the track went on!
The main things to improve on would be:
-Having more even pressure on nose manuals
-If you're making an omni in the future, add one XY section of a reasonable length, rather than 3 sections that are only a few lines
-Don't add random un-evenly pressured flatsled curves. It looks kinda lazy.
Anyways, congrats on making a 3-minute track.
The main things to improve on would be:
-Having more even pressure on nose manuals
-If you're making an omni in the future, add one XY section of a reasonable length, rather than 3 sections that are only a few lines
-Don't add random un-evenly pressured flatsled curves. It looks kinda lazy.
Anyways, congrats on making a 3-minute track.
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
You like the track or you don't.. /
-Look, I made this track because I wanted to make some new tricks I've never done before, and some of them were XY
-I'm allready working on the pressure of my nose manuals.
-I made this track because I like to make tracks, for the fun of it, not to show my skills. And I liked the flatsled curves, that's why I made them. Maybe there Are not the best, but I like them.
And another thing, I made this is 2 weeks
-Look, I made this track because I wanted to make some new tricks I've never done before, and some of them were XY
-I'm allready working on the pressure of my nose manuals.
-I made this track because I like to make tracks, for the fun of it, not to show my skills. And I liked the flatsled curves, that's why I made them. Maybe there Are not the best, but I like them.
And another thing, I made this is 2 weeks
Pinter- Member
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
Good job, dude! I really enjoyed watching this video! One of the most creative tracks I've seen the last months! Also you have some awesome music here, I love that song (the first one ).
I agree with Cereal on the things you should improve But I think you have some great manual talent!
I favorite this track (and the good recording )
Edit: 2 weeks?!
I agree with Cereal on the things you should improve But I think you have some great manual talent!
I favorite this track (and the good recording )
Edit: 2 weeks?!
Sssschiller- Member
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
yup, Survive (Other track) was posted 19 January, I was done with the track on 5 february, That's 2 and a half week ?
Pinter- Member
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
Aww I KNEW I forgot to add something about the recording <.< Oops..
The recording was 30 frames per second, and I think you exported at 25 frames per second, causing a slight lag.. It's okay though.
As for the track, you did an awesome job! So much improvement! Your tailies are awesome! It's a really creative track as well! I loved the flatsled part! Reminded me of No Title by Owly hahaha. As for the faster nosies, just do what my recent tutorial says and you'll be fine!+rep! Aww I miss rep ;_;
The recording was 30 frames per second, and I think you exported at 25 frames per second, causing a slight lag.. It's okay though.
As for the track, you did an awesome job! So much improvement! Your tailies are awesome! It's a really creative track as well! I loved the flatsled part! Reminded me of No Title by Owly hahaha. As for the faster nosies, just do what my recent tutorial says and you'll be fine!
Rafael- Line Rider Legend
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
i'm the first no elite and OP poster on this thread.
il like the concepte of overlenghty track, but I find it lacks some fling, and too much flatsledding part for me
so still a great track
il like the concepte of overlenghty track, but I find it lacks some fling, and too much flatsledding part for me
so still a great track
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
Dude that was long. The XY was pretty decent over all, just trying making those wells more stronger. Try to focus more on those curves and making them smoother. On the other side the flow of the track went right along with the music. I especially like the experimenting you did. That was a very nice track, good job and keep it up.
Stallie- Member
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
efrazable wrote:I miss rep as well...
indeed^
Also, yes, I did enjoy it.
Cereal- Line Rider Legend
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
On very rare occasions do I feel like the creator of a track truly had fun making it an was infused with the spirit that is line rider.
Yes it was noob, yes it had flow killers, but I could tell that didn't matter, and at your skill, it was pro.
I too have mixed feelings, I mainly believed this was caused by the song. I believe that if you are going to use a song with frequently changing tempos, the track too should sync with it. Some parts of the song were upbeat, in the middle of a flow killer, and vice versa.
The manuals and flat sledding were amazingly nice, despite the "choppy-ness" of the lines (I honestly have no idea why the smoothness of a curve matters, but that's what it is), but you drew what had to be ridden.
from 2:14 - 2:17 was some of the best manual reversals I have ever seen, and was not expecting any of them (IMO, the best reversals are one you don't expect).
from 2:55 to end was the best climax I have seen. A semi fast track to a sudden gain in speed to a slow (bit of a flow killer) stall. Made me shiver. Though there could of been more frame skips in that frame skip part.
8/10
Yes it was noob, yes it had flow killers, but I could tell that didn't matter, and at your skill, it was pro.
I too have mixed feelings, I mainly believed this was caused by the song. I believe that if you are going to use a song with frequently changing tempos, the track too should sync with it. Some parts of the song were upbeat, in the middle of a flow killer, and vice versa.
The manuals and flat sledding were amazingly nice, despite the "choppy-ness" of the lines (I honestly have no idea why the smoothness of a curve matters, but that's what it is), but you drew what had to be ridden.
from 2:14 - 2:17 was some of the best manual reversals I have ever seen, and was not expecting any of them (IMO, the best reversals are one you don't expect).
from 2:55 to end was the best climax I have seen. A semi fast track to a sudden gain in speed to a slow (bit of a flow killer) stall. Made me shiver. Though there could of been more frame skips in that frame skip part.
8/10
Re: Pinter - Riddle - 3 minute track
Very impressive smooth curves, nice recycling, flatsledding which looks deliberate and appropriate, all nice. A little stop-start in places, but who am I to judge?
You dedicated yourself to this track well, especially to make three mins, so well done. I enjoyed watching it
You dedicated yourself to this track well, especially to make three mins, so well done. I enjoyed watching it
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