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Post by Pinter Sun Dec 25, 2011 2:51 pm

ROMERO

A track I started a long time ago and I had to release it sometime.. So, here it is!

Enjoy & give some critism please.
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Post by efrazable Sun Dec 25, 2011 7:01 pm

Are you anomaly posing as a nub? Suspicious
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Post by Inukaza Sun Dec 25, 2011 7:04 pm

efrazable wrote:Are you anomaly posing as a nub? Suspicious

wut.

You noticeably got better though.

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Post by Opal Rider Sun Dec 25, 2011 10:09 pm

The style actually does look like anomaly in a strange sort of way...
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Post by linerage Sun Dec 25, 2011 10:28 pm

If ya looked at the old anom videos at around 2007-2008, this is a little similar Smile

nice. And the track was pretty long too Very Happy
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Post by Orthuss Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:00 pm

The track was pretty long, gotta give you credit for that. It had several moments that I liked a LOT, such as the highspeed manuals. But some little things like the all X/all Y sections really didn't seem to fit. In other words, for me it was a series of moments with a little too much filler in between. If you're making a serious track, focus on eliminating some of that filler.

That said, nice job. I'm glad you had fun on this. I can see the slight anomaly resemblance, true, and I can definitely see you improving. Smile
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Post by Pinter Mon Dec 26, 2011 6:32 am

Thnx all Very Happy, but anomaly, i've never seen any track of him so he didn't inspire me or something.

But did all of you noticed that there were blue, red and bled parts ?
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Post by bbshabob1 Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:23 am

so cool i see him more like 1473
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Post by Yobanjojoe Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:55 am

Pinter wrote:Thnx all Very Happy, but anomaly, i've never seen any track of him so he didn't inspire me or something.

But did all of you noticed that there were blue, red and bled parts ?

Really? he invented g-wells.
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Post by Pinter Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:41 am

Yobanjojoe wrote:
Pinter wrote:Thnx all Very Happy, but anomaly, i've never seen any track of him so he didn't inspire me or something.

But did all of you noticed that there were blue, red and bled parts ?

Really? he invented g-wells.

0.o That's to bad of me that i never heard of him then.. But I saw an houwr ago an vid of him, It's much better than me :P
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Post by Georgio_jc Mon Dec 26, 2011 10:16 am

wow that was really good! I love the messy, yet effective forms your curves have! I also liked that you didn't overuse integration...those rare moments were perfect.
I've realized your manuals got more consistent towards the end, so gratz on that! =)
Looking forward to seeing more work from you, it's definitely interesting to watch!
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Post by Stallie Mon Dec 26, 2011 12:34 pm

That was very good Pinter, you have improved a very lot. The only thing I saw that was wrong was the colored version. You could have shortened the colored version in WMM, but oh well it was good on the other hand.
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Post by Pinter Tue Dec 27, 2011 6:41 am

Stallie wrote:That was very good Pinter, you have improved a very lot. The only thing I saw that was wrong was the colored version. You could have shortened the colored version in WMM, but oh well it was good on the other hand.

What's WMM ?
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Post by KillinTime2792 Tue Dec 27, 2011 9:41 am

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