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Linerider: Ragequit

Post by Stallie on Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:26 pm

Comment, rate, subscribe and enjoy. 8D



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Re: Linerider: Ragequit

Post by linerage on Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:36 pm

Strange title.

I see you've improved the strength of the wells, but they're not together as normal flings at many times, and random one lined wells make your track look ugly. Keep working on making more powerful flings.

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Re: Linerider: Ragequit

Post by Xanth on Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:43 pm

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Re: Linerider: Ragequit

Post by OTDE on Sun Dec 18, 2011 10:53 pm

The track was pretty nice, but for a track with such a vivid name, I found myself saying "bleh" at the end.

This was probably due to the driving consistency that lurked underneath the surface of the track. Think of the flow of a track like an animal. Jackrabbits are quick, so that when they do stop it has a massive impact. Turtles move slowly, but that gives you time to look at the structure of a turtle and marvel at its ingenuity. Turtles and jackrabbits are both very interesting creatures.

This track had flow that resembled a donkey. It plodded along, consistent but weary, getting you as far as you wanted to go but no further.

Donkeys are not terribly interesting.

Not that it was a horrible track; on the contrary, it was respectably dense and varied. But the flow is everything, and you gotta look below the surface, man!

Again, though, I like where you're going. The fact I even typed this up after a couple weeks away means I care. You seem to be learning the little tricks of alt pretty quickly Wink

Cheers.
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Re: Linerider: Ragequit

Post by automatizer on Mon Dec 19, 2011 8:51 am

quite a strange name, "ragequit" is filled with your talents flowing out of your imagination, so awesome job!

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Re: Linerider: Ragequit

Post by Sssschiller on Mon Dec 19, 2011 10:54 am

good job 8D i find the track pretty funny. Also + to music, it's not the typical line rider music and I like that Smile

In some special way I liked the pressure lack in this track Very Happy
to say it in the way otde said it...I'm a fan of donkeys. The much cooler than horses because they give a sh** about the world 8D

Edit: That are really many shotouts Wink

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Re: Linerider: Ragequit

Post by OTDE on Mon Dec 19, 2011 12:01 pm

@Sssschiller wrote:good job 8D i find the track pretty funny. Also + to music, it's not the typical line rider music and I like that Smile

In some special way I liked the pressure lack in this track Very Happy
to say it in the way otde said it...I'm a fan of donkeys. The much cooler than horses because they give a sh** about the world 8D

Edit: That are really many shotouts Wink

Ah, yes, but do you want your track compared to Eeyore? :P
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Re: Linerider: Ragequit

Post by Sssschiller on Mon Dec 19, 2011 12:20 pm

Spoiler:
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