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Post by IGLima on Wed Nov 16, 2011 4:49 pm


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2sSpoFjPOV0

A new manuquirk that I'm rather proud of. Smile
Besides being my longest naked to date, it also contains some of my best curves and fling work yet. (Finally got that d@mn foot fling.:|)

Hope you all enjoy.8D Scened version should be out by ToC4.
.sol: mediafire.com ?0dhnnaa2ja2p54z

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Post by Sssschiller on Wed Nov 16, 2011 5:13 pm

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Post by Stallie on Wed Nov 16, 2011 5:23 pm

I like it, the smoothness, the flow, the concept of the track, it all adds up pretty nicely, it was very good. Thumbs Up
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Post by Wolf_Spirit on Wed Nov 16, 2011 5:58 pm

Reminded my of earlier Cereal tracks, this was really amazing, I loved all of it ^^
Very well done IGLima Very Happy

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Post by SETH on Wed Nov 16, 2011 6:11 pm

very great job !! i love the smoothness and trick variation, all the track is well done!

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Post by efrazable on Wed Nov 16, 2011 6:34 pm

I clicked the play button, and thought "this is gonna be scened for his toc4 entry". I was gonna post my prediction, but then I saw the description.

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Post by OTDE on Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:54 pm

I think I love you.
Those manuals were... beautiful ;_;
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Post by Cereal on Wed Nov 16, 2011 9:20 pm

Wow, reminds me of when JZorr released Silent Flame. Gotta love when people release beastah manual tracks out of nowhere!

I can tell that you have manuals down well. Track was amazing, but if I were to actually "critique" it, here are a few things to improve on:

-I know that STP head manuals are the greatest thing since sliced bread, and are perfect for speeding up bosh in those "losing flow" situations. However, I would advise that you should only use those as a last resort. They don't really show much skill, but like I said, are great for if you're stuck.

-When making a "srs" track, try to make it seem as if you put equal effort into every manual. Most of the manuals were great, but there were a couple in there that seemed a bit rushed.

-Lastly, try to have more fling variation. I noticed a lot of spidey/nose flings in there.

Keep these suggestions in mind, you'll be on your way to fame and fortune. (sort of). :|


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Post by rabid squirrel on Thu Nov 17, 2011 12:13 pm

Dude! That was beastly!

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Post by IGLima on Thu Nov 17, 2011 5:36 pm

Thanks for all the comments guys. Smile
@Cereal wrote:Wow, reminds me of when JZorr released Silent Flame. Gotta love when people release beastah manual tracks out of nowhere!

I can tell that you have manuals down well. Track was amazing, but if I were to actually "critique" it, here are a few things to improve on:

-I know that STP head manuals are the greatest thing since sliced bread, and are perfect for speeding up bosh in those "losing flow" situations. However, I would advise that you should only use those as a last resort. They don't really show much skill, but like I said, are great for if you're stuck.

-When making a "srs" track, try to make it seem as if you put equal effort into every manual. Most of the manuals were great, but there were a couple in there that seemed a bit rushed.

-Lastly, try to have more fling variation. I noticed a lot of spidey/nose flings in there.

Keep this suggestions in mind, you'll be on your way to fame and fortune. (sort of). :|

Thanks for the kind words and criticism fellow manual-er. All the points you made were pretty fair, since I did use a lot of the same stuff repeatedly. :P As for the rushing of some of them, this track wasn't actually made to be super srs, as I just wanted to make a clean manual track to scene, so I wasn't too worried about making things perfect.
I also like how you said "make it seem like you put effort" rather than "put effort" xD

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Post by Phyxius on Thu Nov 17, 2011 6:20 pm

Really smooth!, Looking forward to the scened version haha!
Keep making these tracks. they are enjoyable!

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Post by linerage on Thu Nov 17, 2011 8:14 pm

Make more of these! Smile

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Post by Brandon971 on Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:47 pm

@linerage wrote:Make more of these! Smile
Very enjoyable to watch. I enjoy much more than the usual tracks with all of the crazy tricks. Nice smooth manuals, I try to be very strict with myself when making them because I know I'll regret it lol.

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