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Post by Summoning on Wed Oct 19, 2011 5:58 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lxfUdd-bC6Y



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Post by Chui Ninji on Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:09 pm

Sum.... why is your music choice so goddam amazing? /jealous

I really liked grolls. Very nice. :3 And "OH YOU TRICKSTER YOU!" @0:55 ish timeish ness. I like the recycling too. Twas quite amazing.

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Re: Shimmer

Post by Inukaza on Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:25 pm

This was...... great...


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Post by Cereal on Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:32 pm

Holy poop.... your quirk was awesome at the beginning, and your manuquirk during the 2nd half was incredible!

Even though the nose manuals had little pressure, it was very even pressure. I also was blown away by some of those recycles.

My only complaint would be that there were too many nose manuals on the nose:tail ratio. Overall, I'd say that this is your best track, yet!

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Post by Stallie on Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:43 pm

That was very good, the song really fit the track, just right, nice job. 8D

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Re: Shimmer

Post by Summoning on Wed Oct 19, 2011 7:59 pm

I like my music too Chui ;3.

And Cereal, I'd say it's my best yet too Very Happy.

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Re: Shimmer

Post by linerage on Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:40 pm

reminded me of rovano, cereal, splash, and votale :3 mang dat was an awesome track. And the 4th position foot fling was just bawss

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Re: Shimmer

Post by SETH on Thu Oct 20, 2011 12:00 pm

wow , it's awesome , it's so fluid

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Re: Shimmer

Post by LineMagiX on Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:00 pm

Only advice I can think of is too add more "Umph!" to your quirk. Smile The manuals are nearing perfection.

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Re: Shimmer

Post by Sheldon on Thu Oct 20, 2011 9:15 pm

Style
9/10
This track had quite a bit of style. Summoning, your style is very clean and smooth. I enjoyed the manual and alt quirk sections the most. Those sections had a lot of cool movement, control, and recycles. The quirk however was pretty average and not so stylish, but it was clean! But maybe that is the style I just perfer high power skill-quirk over smooth stylish quirk.
Control
8/10
The control was very good in every section except the quirk section, others may disagree. I have very high expectations for quirk. One moment of control that really stuck out to me was 0:40. That move reminded me of Leomur. The area that had the most control would have to be either the manuals or the alt quirk. Those manual recycles were insane, but the control in the alt quirk was also insane. Excuse my use of the word alt, I know the quirk was actually progressive, that just takes a while to type on iPod. xD
Skill
8/10
The track had a ton of skill in most of the sections. The quirk was a bit lacking in skill though. It might just be that I don't have much of an eye for stylish quirk. I felt like the quirk needed more power. The alt quirk section was very Leomur-like, thats always cool. The manuals had a bit of skill. I thought the manuals were lacking in skill just a little. I thought the first few manuals were rather mediocre; slow and low pressure. That is until I found that those were blue. Don't sweat it to much, slow high presdured manuals are hard to execute properly, especially blue ones!
Fun
8/10
The movement and control in this track makes it very fun. The alt quirk was bouncy and such, and the manuals had some fun lulzy recycles as welk as some deceiving green curves. The quirk, lacking in skill, was exceedingly fun. This is common in stylish quirk, but rare in this form. This track was pretty fun overall, like most of your tracks.

Overall
8/10
Your tracks are entertaining without being overly impressive, which is pretty difficult to do. This has to be your best track so far, and one of your longest. Even though the manuals were completed in two days they were really good! The quirk was fun and stylish, the alt quirk bouncy and Leomur-like, and the manuals; slow, stylish and deceiving. Awesome track, Summoning. Keep it up, I can't wait to see more from you. Smile


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Re: Shimmer

Post by efrazable on Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:11 pm

I love it.

I hate it when I'm halfway through a blue track, then I lose blue inspiration, and give up.

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Re: Shimmer

Post by Summoning on Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:48 pm

efrazable wrote:I love it.

I hate it when I'm halfway through a blue track, then I lose blue inspiration, and give up.

I didn't really give up, manuals are just more enjoyable when bled Smile.

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